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The Vines of Love

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Meadowmuse
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My Heart

The Vines of Love



The vines of Love's embrace
have found me reeling
Entangled through my heart
with fevered feeling

As our hearts, now woven,
merge in pulsing fashion
Reaching tendrils cling and coil
with pure love's passion

And through the flowing,
fluid whisperings of emotion  
These Vines of Love
surround and seal
our hearts' devotion



Happy Valentines Day Everyone
~ Claire ~





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Mike
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1 posted 02-14-2000 01:21 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Beautifully expressed.  May you gaze upon a shining star tonight and be touched by its
slendor.  
Michael
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2 posted 02-14-2000 02:45 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Ah that such devotion could be sealed and clung to forever.   I am envious.  Beautiful poem, Claire.


Michael
sweetcollege_girl
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3 posted 02-14-2000 03:17 PM       View Profile for sweetcollege_girl   Email sweetcollege_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetcollege_girl

thanks claire! Happy Valentine's Day to you too!   Great poem!

stay cool claire

~~Lavada~~
Andrew Scott
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4 posted 02-14-2000 03:43 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Lady of the Meadow... how beautiful are your words... perfect for the day and the heart. I also like the choice of font... works well with the poem. Have a wonderful day.
Meadowmuse
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Mike...thank you for that beautiful wish. May your gaze and heart rest upon that same star of splendor.

Michael...no need for envy, at least where I'm concerned ~ this was written mostly from memory. I do thank you for reading, though, and am pleased that you liked this.

Lavada...thanks for reading, and I'll try to stay cool!  

Claire
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6 posted 02-14-2000 04:19 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Claire I like those vines of love.  Hope you have a special valentines day.    James
HelmutB
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7 posted 02-14-2000 04:25 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Beautiful words to a beautiful occation
Such softness and devotion
Wonderful

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

CMGrimm
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8 posted 02-14-2000 04:30 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Very well done.  I am completely intrigued by the amount of passion and expertise and professionalism...and ....well...I'm just intrigued.  Loved it.  cmg
Wizzard
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9 posted 02-14-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Very Sweet Claire.
And now i have 4 little word`s for you.

HAPPY VALENTINE`S DAY CLAIRE


Hope your Love find`s it`s way into another`s heart.Thank`s for sharing  
 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.





[This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-14-2000).]
Meadowmuse
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Andrew...Thank you for reading and for your kind and touching words...so glad you enjoyed my poem.

James...thank you so much, for the kinds words, and the beating heart. I hope your evening is special as well.

Helmut...thank you for reading this and sharing your thoughts...I'm so glad you liked this. (((you)))

CMG...professionalism?? intrigue?? I don't know, I just write what I feel. Thanks for reading and letting me know you liked!

Wizzard...What four little words can do to a heart! Thank you so much for such a sweet message. Hope your day is blessed with love.  

hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 02-15-2000 09:02 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Happy Valentines Day Claire...and like the clinging vine, I held onto each and every word of this....beautiful in content and form  
Meadowmuse
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Thank you, Ms. Hoot Owl. So glad you enjoyed this poem...I wondered if it was too "mushy"...   I guess it was alright..lol

Claire
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Yeah, it was too mushy! Just teasing Claire. This is actually bordering on erotic in the "feel" of it! It seems to breathe passion to the reader. Ethereal in a very real sort of way!  
Martie
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Your words are so lovely, Claire.  
Meadowmuse
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Christopher...thanks for reading, even if it was too mushy! I'm glad the erotic quality came through...I was attempting a movement toward that direction, but with a sense of subtlety.  

Martie...thank you so much, Martie. A wonderful compliment coming from you.

Claire
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lovely sentimesnts, and very well expressed.
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17 posted 02-16-2000 01:34 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Jeez, Claire, you have me down on the floor from the subtle power (somehow, not an oxymoron) in your words. You've talked about love in many of its facets all in so few verses. Teach me, mold me. Well, okay, I won't go THAT far, but I will say, great poem!

Mike
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18 posted 02-16-2000 08:13 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Claire~
This is absolutely beautiful.
The intertwining of the limbs of love
is very sensually done.
How very, very much I admire your work.
You paint upon the canvas, a masterpiece.
~*Marge*~


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Meadowmuse
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Gunslinger...Thank you for reading this one, and for the kindly response.

Mike...Thanks for saying all that you said.

Marge...we are in mutual admiration, then. Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this.

Claire
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Meadow,
Don't know how this one got past me. Lovely words, lovely poem. *L* Sy
Nan
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I'm with you, Sy... Very nice, Claire..
 
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