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Lovers vaudeville

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Seymour Tabin
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      Lovers vaudeville

The curtain opens on a time.
The hour glass bows in prime
And spotted in a flood of light,
Forever, in a heart as bright.

A setting of a special kind,
The backdrop of a highlight mind.
Forever will this portrait be,
The sole editor and trustee.

It is the way of lovers star,
It is the way that lovers are.
It is the unction of lovers think.
For love is the pen and the ink.

A moment of pure confection,
A moment of pure perfection.
The high point of a spirits climb.
Anointment and arrest of time.

The face of beauties overkill.
Frozen in this vaudeville.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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You've created quite the show here Seymore   Enjoyed it a lot  
Seymour Tabin
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Hoot,
Nice comment thank you *L* Sy
Elizabeth Santos
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Sy,
This is absolutely brilliant
Liz
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May the curtains never close on your many gifts.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

HelmutB
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5 posted 02-14-2000 06:33 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

I would not know how to top the replies
And then again why should I
Your poem has left me singing  
Very impressed here

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Dark Angel
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Beautiful and impressive indeed!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Seymour Tabin
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Sunshine, Thank you so much. *L*

Helmut, Thank you for the impressed.

Dark Angel, Beautiful compliments, thank you.
*L* Sy
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....and you put on quite a show yourself, Sy. Well done.
Eloise
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Excellent Sy.  Enjoyed the read.  
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Seymour~
ENCORE !  ENCORE !

~*Marge*~
  


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 02-15-2000 07:55 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Balladeer, Well you know what they say, the show must go on.

Eloise, Thank you for the excellent.

Marge, You are absolutely lovable. *L* Sy
 
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