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angelswing
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0 posted 2000-02-14 07:24 AM



Yet anouther year alone .

This is it,
on valentine,
I always spend alone,
I dought this year will change my plight,
not now,
I'm all alone,
my fears arise,
from in my heart,
the feelings there again,
the lonlyness,
the hurt,
the strife,
the knowing,
feeling down .
The blues and soul,
the rock and roll,
play strong and long and true,
you know the line that's coming next,
that's right the 'I love you',
this year the words are never said,
except to plain thin air,
all lady's run and flee from me,
in case I call them fair,
the 'I love you' has left my mind,
it never will get said,
I'm sure someone will say it when,
I'm gone and cold and dead .  


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

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silvershaddow
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1 posted 2000-02-14 07:27 AM


I know exactly how you're feeling. I'm sure that one day, someone will whisper you the words "I love you".
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2 posted 2000-02-14 07:29 AM


~*HUGS*~
~*Marge*~


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angelswing
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3 posted 2000-02-15 04:06 AM


Many thanks to you both, I guess some one at least must care . The sadness wont last long, It will go soon enough .
devina
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Cali
4 posted 2000-02-15 04:11 AM


I can mirror your thoughts on this day...here's a hug to help you through!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

HelmutB
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5 posted 2000-02-15 04:45 AM


I guess I'm lucky then
although I know how you feel
But there is so much other, and things that make this day so real
There is my cat
He loves me when he's fat
There is my fish
He loves me every day I don't put him on my dish
There is the sun
She loves me when she beams onto the one
There is my friend
the one on who I always can depend
There is Passions with all those Hearts
There love me with their special Art
So you know what I have said
Come back to live, your looking rather funny when your dead

Nice poem you did, but I could not let it go by.

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
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6 posted 2000-02-15 07:19 AM


Thanks to all for there hugs, care and positive thoughts, I embrace you all, and welcome your support, when I'm in need, bless you all, weather you have found romance or if you haven't, as long as there is care, we'll all get through the pain and sorrow with a little help from our friends .
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