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A Poem to Say "I Love You"
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A Poem to Say "I Love You" |
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jcthaman Junior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 22Hershey, PA, USA |
words can't explain the way i feel about you i never thought i'd find a love, a love so true a love for which i pray every night, then dream about until morning's first light but even in the daytime, you never leave my mind the mere thought of you sends shivers down my spine and although there may come a day when we must part your face is forever engrained in my heart. your beautiful face, whish those luscious lips, cute little nose, and deep brown eyes, if i win anything in life, i want you to be the prize, or maybe just to have our lips locked in a passionate kiss, why, that alone would bring me such bliss I fear i am going nowhere with this poem, so without further ado: i've written this poem to tell you that "I love you" [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 02-14-2000).] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Very nice, sweat poem . For a particular valentine ? If yes, I hope you read it to them and it has the desired affect . |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
I'd say you've got yourself a pickup line! hehe  Great poem! I'd love this if I were her...wow! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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silvershaddow Junior Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 19 |
I know exactly what you mean. If only i'd had these words last week. A great little poem. Have a read of mine and let me know what you think. |
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