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A Poem to Say "I Love You"

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jcthaman
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since 11-27-1999
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Hershey, PA, USA


0 posted 02-14-2000 06:57 AM       View Profile for jcthaman   Email jcthaman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jcthaman

words can't explain the way i feel about you
i never thought i'd find a love, a love so true
a love for which i pray every night,
then dream about until morning's first light
but even in the daytime, you never leave my mind
the mere thought of you sends shivers down my spine
and although there may come a day when we must part
your face is forever engrained in my heart.
your beautiful face, whish those luscious lips, cute little nose, and deep brown eyes,
if i win anything in life, i want you to be the prize,
or maybe just to have our lips locked in a passionate kiss,
why, that alone would bring me such bliss
I fear i am going nowhere with this poem, so without further ado:
i've written this poem to tell you that "I love you"


[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 02-14-2000).]
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angelswing
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since 02-10-2000
Posts 718
United Kingdom


1 posted 02-14-2000 07:05 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Very nice, sweat poem . For a particular valentine ? If yes, I hope you read it to them and it has the desired affect .
Little_Spyro
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since 01-09-2000
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San Diego, CA, USA


2 posted 02-14-2000 07:06 AM       View Profile for Little_Spyro   Email Little_Spyro   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Little_Spyro

I'd say you've got yourself a pickup line! hehe  
Great poem! I'd love this if I were her...wow!

Little Spyro T. Dragon
silvershaddow
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3 posted 02-14-2000 07:06 AM       View Profile for silvershaddow   Email silvershaddow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for silvershaddow

I know exactly what you mean. If only i'd had these words last week. A great little poem. Have a read of mine and let me know what you think.
 
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