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My Forbidden and Secret Love

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silvershaddow
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0 posted 02-14-2000 06:22 AM       View Profile for silvershaddow   Email silvershaddow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for silvershaddow

My Forbidden and Secret Love

You know I'll always trust you
I know you'll take good care
Its not 'cause of you that I worry
But the other idiots out there.

I know that now you're taken
And I know that you'll never be mine
But please don't leave me on my own
For any length of time.

Each time you enter into my life
I smile my secret smile
And the flame in my heart burns brighter
Just being with you for a while.

But when you leave me on my own
I shed my secret tear
For although I know that I shouldn't
I like to hold you near.

And as I try and close this chapter,
I must accept that it'll never be
And wish you all the happiness
Just you, and her, not me.


Written by Alison Verkroost

© Copyright 2000 Alison Verkroost - All Rights Reserved
Little_Spyro
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since 01-09-2000
Posts 665
San Diego, CA, USA


1 posted 02-14-2000 07:09 AM       View Profile for Little_Spyro   Email Little_Spyro   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Little_Spyro

I'm so lucky I haven't had to face that situation yet...thanks for bringing it to my attention!  

Great poem!

Little Spyro T. Dragon
angelswing
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since 02-10-2000
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2 posted 05-08-2000 07:21 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Nice poem Ali, it reads like a book, smooth and descriptive, you should get back into this poetry lark, it's great and you certainly have the talent for it .
L.of.L. Tom


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland


3 posted 05-09-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi S!
That was a nice portrayal of what others can do if you're don't have a mind that reasons when required.

Sincerely
A_L
Casonova
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since 04-29-2000
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Mays Landing


4 posted 05-10-2000 09:14 PM       View Profile for Casonova   Email Casonova   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Casonova

Hey silvershadow,
  Great post here, I really appreciated it, cause I have gone through exactly the same thing, and you brought it out so clear. thanks again for this. And welcome to passions, I think you'll enjoy it here.
  
 
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