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dash rendor
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0 posted 02-14-2000 04:28 AM       View Profile for dash rendor   Email dash rendor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dash rendor

Gentle rocking
A sloshing sound
Softly drips
Far away splash
Quiet wind whistles
The sounds inside
My lonely heart
Soothing but sad
Free and restricted
Gentle yet raging
Bonds of loneliness
Bonds for love
Empty hearts
Will float forever
On a sea of tears
Crying for love
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Denise
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1 posted 02-14-2000 09:53 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Dash! This is so sad yet so beautiful! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise
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2 posted 02-14-2000 06:59 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

I really like the flow you have going here.  The message is clear and descriptive.

Marina
Ted Reynolds
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Your use of "s"s greatly increases the effect of this when read aloud.
hoot_owl_rn
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Very nicely done ....welcome to passions  
CMGrimm
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Nice one Dash.  I'll be looking forward to see more from you.  Welcome to passions.

Chris
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