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Millenium

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spiked
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Visions of laughter
Thoughts of the past
Looking to the future
Hoping it will last
We approach a new time
A millennium of sort
Where our future and past cross
Which path do we take?
My mind and thoughts lost
I look for the answers
But none can be found
Only time has these answers.
Oh father time hold me
Assist me to see
What the coming year baby
Has in store for me.


© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-14-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Wistful and sweet, spiked, I like this.  You should express this side of yourself more often.  Lovely.
spiked
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Thanks serenity
not all is dark I do see light sometimes.
Just don't usually put that side in words.
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3 posted 02-15-2000 01:05 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

And you are up late tonight...
spiked
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4 posted 02-15-2000 01:08 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

just checking out to see if you read this syrupy crap lol.
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Nicely written spiked.  Very interested in reading more from you.

Chris
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6 posted 02-15-2000 01:15 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

thanks cwgrimm
wonderful getting what I write read by so many great writers. Makes me feel a part of something.

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