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Images in the Sand

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Little_Spyro
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0 posted 02-13-2000 07:44 PM       View Profile for Little_Spyro   Email Little_Spyro   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Little_Spyro

Darkness falls on the beach
As slowly but surely you reach
The spot you had chosen that day
To look up at the stars and stay.

In the dark, the ocean breeze
Calms your soul, your troubles ease
And sand around you still feels warm
From many hours of sun's brutal scorn.

You cannot see, in the grayish sand
The transient markings in the land
Made by those who had gone by
When blue sea also made up the sky.

In the sand drawn pictures of
Different things, some made with love,
Some created out of the blue
And many of them made by you.

And even as the darkness sets,
You make pictures; they're your steps
As you walk by pacific seas
And graced by gentle ocean breeze.


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1 posted 02-13-2000 08:15 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Sam! Another lovely visit to the beach!!

Denise
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2 posted 02-13-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

So lovely!  I've really got to see the ocean some day...

 *Krista Knutson*

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This was beautiful! Makes me want to take a walk along the sandy shore!

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4 posted 02-14-2000 12:23 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Spyro-
This is lovely.

I love a walk on the ocean's porch
when the stars are twinkling high.
Oh, the stories the sand could tell
of lovers who've walked the beaches
and left their heartprints on the sand.

Thanks for a lovely rendering.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 02-14-2000 04:05 AM       View Profile for dash rendor   Email dash rendor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dash rendor

wonderful. Just how i remember the sea from my childhood.  You sure can give me visions and help me recall my dear memories. thanx
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6 posted 02-14-2000 07:18 AM       View Profile for silvershaddow   Email silvershaddow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for silvershaddow

A great poem. Thanks for reminding me of the pleasures of the beach.
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