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jascanvey
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0 posted 02-13-2000 07:11 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jascanvey

Alone I sit and face the day
Knowing you aren't far away
Your silence screaming in my head
And once again to an empty bed.

What went wrong I'll never know
What you feel you'll never show
So we go on with this masquerade
Dealing with mistakes we've made.

I've learned the lesson very well
And I promise not a soul to tell
Inside I know I must contend
With keeping you just as a friend.

This is enough, I will accept
I'm not afraid to feel bereft
But thank you kindly for this stake
And know my heart is to forsake.

The memories now are locked in tight
The feelings will change - with a fight
I have my friend back, my fears erased
The road to serenity clearly pathed.

~Julie~
© Copyright 2000 Julie - All Rights Reserved
Parker
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1 posted 02-13-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Julie, This reminds me of a place I've been more than once. I know all will work out for you, I know because you have a star in the sky. Hugs...

Parker...

ps. I liked this poem a whole lot.
just_another_fe
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2 posted 02-13-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

YAY!!!!! I AM SO HAPPY FOR YOU GIRL. *HUGZ* THIS IS A GREAT POEM AND I LOVE THE STORY BEHIND IT!! ITS ABOUT TIME HUH LOL *HIGH FIVE* LOL
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3 posted 02-13-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Julie-
I like the way this poem seemed to
flow outward so easily from you.
Very uplifting look at the road
to serenity.
~*Marge*~


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jascanvey
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4 posted 02-14-2000 01:34 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Parker - you are my star, honey! Thanks for the sweet words.

Angie - Phew! Are your toes numb?  

Marge - thanks for popping in. Your words always seem to fill me with love, thankyou.
christies heart
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5 posted 02-14-2000 01:44 PM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for christies heart

Boy I can relate to all these feelings, as well as to what it feels like to make peace with them and move on. Very nicely expressed! Christie..  
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6 posted 02-14-2000 11:47 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Ill clear the path for you and put a pot of coffee on...lovely...
Wizzard
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7 posted 02-14-2000 11:56 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Very nice Julie.
I can feel your emotion`s in this one.
Thank you for sharing

Happy Valentine`s Day


 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

jascanvey
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8 posted 02-15-2000 01:15 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Christie - thankyou for the kind words.

serenity - I may take you up on the offer......

Wizzard - you are very sweet
just_another_fe
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9 posted 02-15-2000 11:24 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

LOL YES HULIE THEY ARE....CAN I UNCROSS THEM YET?????? PLEAZEEEEEEEEE IM BEGGIN YOU LOL.
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