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Not the Happiest Valentine's Day...
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Not the Happiest Valentine's Day... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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On this day, I give you roses of red- One for each time my heart has bled, Petals so soft and vulnerable in store- Just as my heart, crushed upon the floor. Thick green stems, simply the finest- Just as the ropes that eternally bind us, And the thorns, ever hidden from view- Many times I’ve felt the prick of you. The thinly lined wrapper, color of gold, Conceals the very truths left untold. The ribbon of delicately woven silk strands, Reminding of my tears, so freely they ran. This gift being my final loose end- To a battle I simply could not win, Saying goodbye to our life of past- I wish you the best of luck to be had. I wish there was more that I could say... This is definantly not the Happy Valentine's Day... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ditto on the emotions, devina - Definately not a Happy Valentine's Day. At least you seem to be closing the door to the past and the unattainable. You're probably a step ahead of me there... Things will change for you soon, I see a smile in your future. Michael |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, This a very nicely done poem. I wish I could say the things that you need. Healing takes far too much time it seems. What you need is a deversion. Though we love you here at passions, get off this computer get out make new friends. Put a big smile on that lovely face, show those lushes lips, and they will come running. A new romance always helps to fade the other behind.... Hugs Parker |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
A diversion helps, but doesn't heal. That comes from within. And this eloquently written piece shows you have the strength to, someday, move on. Great work. Mike |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Very beautifully spoken dear...I applaude you in your moving on. Brighter days are ahead for you indeed. Hold your head high...Happy Valentines Day from little 'ol me nonetheless!!  ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
It fills my heart with sadness to see That there is no Valantine for thee If we all think of thee Would that help just a little tiny wee A rose for you I cannot send (still haven't figure this on out yet) But here's a virtual HUG that I will spend Nevertheless, the poem is beautifully made dear The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
I love the way you've taken every part of a rose and given it a different meaning....great work...but then again, your poems always are!!!!  Bobbycat =^..^= |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
devina, your poem is a fragrant bouquet of feelings...love, loss, bitterness, anguish, strength and hope...all delicately gathered and beautifully arranged. Happy Valentines Day from me to you. Claire |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
So sad an beautiful at the same time. May you have happier days ahead, it just isnt worth feeling that way  I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This is sad, but it does sound like you're moving on. Very well written! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Micheal...things may change for you too- just wait and see!!  As for Valentine's day this year...I think I'll wait for next year's love...James- now are you trying to get rid of me dear??? lol...a diversion might be a bit too easy at this point...I'm beginning to think that all the good men are taken!!! But I send a hug back your way dear!!!! Mike- I guess this is the ending of the pain...time will tell! Gen- Happy Valentine's Day back atcha dear...you've been sorely missed!!! Helmut- to know you're thinking of me so kindly...could only bring a smile dear man...hugs to you too!!! Bobbycat- my thanks to you, in hopes that your day is much better!!! Claire- the same to you sweetie!! Mistikman & WhtDove- moving on I am...to happier days friends!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sorry you are not having a happy valentines day Devina. This is a nice reminder that on these occasions, Christmas too, not everyone is happy, some are sad. I am hoping that a special blessing will come your way on valentines day. James |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well I need a valentine on this day too, maybe who knows it could be you.  I would not get rid of you, maybe the deversion could be me. Wishfull thinking on my part. Parker. P.S. Where is this thing I should look a sideways. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
great poem girl, sending you big valentines day hugs....this has been a bad holiday for a long time for me.....here's hoping for next year |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is sad...but many of us can relate to what you are feeling right now. Keep your chin up |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Devina, it is not a happy Valentine's Day for me either. . . but for a different reason. . .thank you though for your words. . . they are wonderful as always. . .and I too see another smile in your future. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
jmlee- thanks you so much...it's my hope too!! James- Would you be my Valentine, sweet man??? A diversion- on second thought...get your butt on a plane James Parker!!!!! And this sideways thing... @~~'~~,~ is a rose. XXOO Corazon- (devina raises her glass) Cheers m'friend...shall we celebrate this one together!!?? V-day hugs back atcha hun!!! Ruth-*Chin up*- just for you Ruthie dear!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Just wanted to say ditto..love ths poem. It's not always all hearts and flowers. Even when it is, the petels are not always so fresh.  Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sven- you must have snuck in there when I was replying...I think I know the only reason yours isn't so happy!!! (hold her in your dreams m'friend)CH- thanks so much for understanding!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, I would be honoured to be your Valentine. I don't know if I could take the heat down there, ... Oh I don't mean the weather!,,, Well I'm sure I can. I'm going to Florida in March 12-26 I guess that's not close to you. sigh!! By the time I get there you'll be scooped up my sweet Valentine. So I'll have to send you all my hugs and kisses xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox xxx xx xxoooooooxxxxxxx  sorry a little tongue.. want more. Parker |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Hey devina! I have an idea -- let's go out and get REALLY, REALLY DRUNK tonight!! LOL -- you're only about 3000 miles away -- (looking at flight schedule) I might make it there before midnight! LMAO! PS: Valentine's day really sucks. --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
James- Now love...you know I'll wait for you!! From Florida you can just travel westward dear!!!!XXXXXXXXOOOOOOOOO and yes...more tongue please!!!! Kess- I'm game girl!!!! Bags are packed...let's head out!!!! Midnight you say???hehe Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Hey you know... If you meet halfway, then you'll have all that much more time to get plastered!!! Sad poem Devina... thanks for the extra shot of depression! |
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Buffpimp Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 39 |
Hey Devina. This is the first of your work I read. It is very depressing, but i can empathize with it. I dont think they should even have a V-day. You should love someone every day, nit jsut today. Well good luck |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
LOL@you Chris...your are the man with the plan...did we mention that you're invited??? BP- I think you're right about loving someone every day of the year...but Valentine's day does signify more than love- for me it was just letting go this year...maybe next year will be better!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Devina, < !signature-->Very nice writing I can`t give ya flower`s or candy but I can wish you a Happy Valentine`s DayMay Cupid Find His Way To Your Heart Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-14-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful and sad poem, Devina. I'm sure next year will find you smiling! Denise |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Wizzard- wishing you the same m'friend...and it's the thought that counts anyway!!! HUGS!!! Denise- I'm glad to see you back...your warm replies have been missed by this lonely poet!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA |
That was an awesome poem. My valentines day was pretty crappy too. My girlfriend just broke up with me a little while ago. This is the second time this has happened. Enough about my problems, great poem. trevorskogsbergh |
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silvershaddow Junior Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 19 |
Many of of don't seem to have a good valentines day, but hopefully next year will be better. I seem to remember saying that last year as well actually, but hopefully things will change for all of us. A great poem. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
As I say...feel free to vent your anger at any time...there's always an ear to listen here at passion's...and I'm sorry your day wasn't that great either!! Maybe next year for the both of us!!??? Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
SS-You mirror my thoughts as well!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, you and kess should fly over to florida and frolic in the sun with us. That way we can all put Valentines day behind. Parker |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ Sounds like you need to head for sunny Florida ! Now, is this a GREAT DAY AFTER VALENTINE'S DAY or what? Have fun ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Could you handle TWO women really James??tehe (checking schedule to FLorida...maybe friends fly free this time???) Marge- yah, I think I do need a holiday!!! And it's a great day...not being Valentine's and all!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Devina~ So sad. But it does sound to me like you have a strong heart. Your poetry is always so beautiful. I hope you find what your heart is looking for! -SEA |
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