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Valentinsel -- for my wife, 2/14/00
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Valentinsel -- for my wife, 2/14/00 |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Alas, the hours fast diminish Towards the time when I must finish Something that is Valentinish. All I've written seems so minor. Wish I could write something finer Like a proper Valentiner. But, as I have often hinted, Every day our love's new-minted. Today will be Valentinted. Still, mere words seem most confining. Rather, I'd be wining, dining, Loving, for my Valentining. May all good fortune on us shine, And I be yours, and you be mine, Together be one Valentine. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I'm sure she'll love it it's light hearted and slightly whimsical We should all write more often to our wives ... after all ... they mean so much to us ... right?  Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ted- ADORABLE What a wonderful expression of love. So cutely contrived. I love the whimsy and the fun. That's the first rack I check out at the card shops. Again ADORABLE ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
This is cute and touching Ted, I am sure your wife will love it I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Hope your wife sees the heart you've put into this one...very cute!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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silvershaddow Junior Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 19 |
A great poem. I'm sure that your wife will apreciate it. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
This is beautiful. I'm sure the high-esteem you hold for your wife..is much appreciated. Happy Valentine's Day to You! Jenny Lee |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh...she should love it |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Thank you all for your kind words on this. I'm glad you liked it and, best of all, my wife Sing-yi DID love it, and of course that makes me happiest. May you all be as happy. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
And how could she NOT have loved it?? It is precious! Claire |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ted this was a beautiful poem. I'm sure your wife loved it...Happy post valentines day to both of you....Tracie |
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