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Sense & Sensibility

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 02-13-2000 07:46 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Sense & Sensibility


I call to you tonight
In desperate need of
The warmth in your
Heart.

Touch me and let me
Feel your soft caress as
You wrap your wings
Around me

Sing to me with your
Heavenly melodic voice
Whisper to me sweet
Nothings

Delicately kiss my
Fervent lips, urgently
Waiting your burning
Passion.

Listen as our hearts
Beat as one rhythm
Flowing, regulating,
Harmoniously.

Look into the windows
Of my soul, seek and you
Shall find, the depths
Of my love.


Dark Angel.



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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White Wolf
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1 posted 02-13-2000 08:26 AM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for White Wolf

I love this poem.  I know the feeling.  Now the trick is to find someone else with the same need.  Thanx for sharing.

SD


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Then what is living?

Poet deVine
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2 posted 02-13-2000 09:21 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wow! Such intense feeling! I like this a lot DA!  
JennyLee
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3 posted 02-13-2000 12:49 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Beautiful Maree...I always enjoy very much reading your heart-felt words  

Jennifer
Dark Angel
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4 posted 02-13-2000 03:31 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

SD,Thanks so much, so glad you liked it, I hope you find that someone real soon.  
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PdV, thanks so much hon, glad you do  
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JennyLee, thank you, as I do always, enjoy reading your amazing and excellent work very much.   thank you again!


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


devina
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5 posted 02-13-2000 03:53 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is so soft and romantic...I love it!!!! Not too mushy...just enough Definantly one of my favorites DA!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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6 posted 02-13-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Dark Angel-
This is simply lovely.

'Touch me and let me
Feel your soft caress as
You wrap your wings
Around me'

~*Marge*~


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Dark Angel
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7 posted 02-14-2000 05:12 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Ms Devina, thank you for your lovely reply, makes me feel good to know it is one of your favourites   Glad you liked it!
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Marge, thanks Hon for your lovely reply.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


hoot_owl_rn
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Wow DA....this is absolutely beautiful. I'd have to agree with PDV....this is amoung my favorites of yours no hands down.
Dark Angel
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Ruth hon, thanks so very much for your lovely comment and compliment, so glad you liked it!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


WhtDove
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10 posted 02-15-2000 07:02 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Knocking passionate socks off eh?  Excellent my friend! HUGS

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins
John Yaws
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11 posted 02-15-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for John Yaws   Email John Yaws   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit John Yaws's Home Page   View IP for John Yaws

Well written. This piece displays a great deal of passion.
Severn
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12 posted 02-15-2000 07:11 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Angel - this is gorgeous. Let's hope so hey?
Hugs.

K

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life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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sweet!
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