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Love's Embrace

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Loneheart
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Love's Embrace
Sweet maiden of my heart, My desire, I kneel before thee,
And pledge my passion to thee
As I lay my head, upon thy soft warm bosoms, my eyes shut,
Drifting Into your magical body Afire with desire, and longings,
Ah! Sweet Queen as your delicate fingers disappear into the warmth of my Mouth,
As our bodies rush to eternity and back, taking us to a far Away place.
Of lush forests and cool water's a paradise if you will.
Your touch your taste your scent excites the very essence of my soul.
I thrive on thy beauty I shall spread my vale of love about thee.
Oh! Goddesses of my heart pleasure my lips I pray thee with thy kiss
that I might savor thy soul.
Hearken unto my words of love fair maid and all thy days
shall be filled with a feast of wondrous pleasures yet to come.
Written By Loneheart http://i.am/Loneheart




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All I can say is that these words are EXACTLY how i feel bout my love, even though my love doesnt quite feel the same bout me.   GREAT POEM
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LoneHeart-
Sounds like paradise to me.
Nicely done.
~*Marge*~


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Meadowmuse
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What an exquisite expression of pleasure and passion. Intoxicating use of archaic language...timeless in sentiment. This is superb work!
Claire
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Hey Loneheart, welcome back!!  Whatever happened to you?  This is beautiful as your works always are.  Drop me an email if you like.  I have missed you.

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


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