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Tasi
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0 posted 2000-02-13 12:39 PM



       Spatial context appears balancing
       the visual picture before my eyes.
                   The sand
                   The sun
                   The sea
        all blended in natures harmony.
     A gull riding low on the horizon sends
          out a shrill mournful cry.
There is a sensation of freshness from the salty moist breeze and I wonder if he is celebrating this.

                  Tasi


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-02-13 12:59 PM


Tasi, you've painted a picture in my mind!
Lovely visuals!  Nice, nice, work...

Tasi
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Posts 38
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2 posted 2000-02-13 10:26 AM


Thankyou Serenity I was actually trying to describe something similar to your nick hehe  
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