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A Portrait

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Tasi
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0 posted 02-13-2000 12:39 AM       View Profile for Tasi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tasi


       Spatial context appears balancing
       the visual picture before my eyes.
                   The sand
                   The sun
                   The sea
        all blended in natures harmony.
     A gull riding low on the horizon sends
          out a shrill mournful cry.
There is a sensation of freshness from the salty moist breeze and I wonder if he is celebrating this.

                  Tasi

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serenity blaze
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Tasi, you've painted a picture in my mind!
Lovely visuals!  Nice, nice, work...
Tasi
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Thankyou Serenity I was actually trying to describe something similar to your nick hehe  
 
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