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Raul Noriega
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since 02-12-2000
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0 posted 02-12-2000 11:29 PM       View Profile for Raul Noriega   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Raul Noriega

Do not stars sing a loving hymn
of dreams commenced
when day grows dim?

A piece of light
in darkened night
for all who dare believe
in stories old
in heaven told
of wings of gold
for angels to receive!

Would you not fly
through sullen sky
where heaven does embrace
a child's plea
and memory
of your loving face?

To you I bring
amidst these wings
a song of moonlit streams
and kisses sweet
of where we'll meet
if only in our dreams!
© Copyright 2000 Raul Noriega - All Rights Reserved
Tara Simms
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since 08-12-99
Posts 1285
Honea Path, SC USA


1 posted 02-12-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Welcome to Passions!  I like this poem, such beautiful sentiments it contains.  I especially like the last stanza.

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


Eloise
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since 11-27-1999
Posts 1115
Wyoming


2 posted 02-12-2000 11:38 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

What a beautiful poem to come in with Raul.  Welcome to Passions.  I'm sure you will enjoy your stay here with us.
Tasi
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since 02-08-2000
Posts 42
Canada


3 posted 02-13-2000 12:30 AM       View Profile for Tasi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tasi

Raul  how eloquently said . Welcome to passions   look forward to reading more from you
Tasi
Wizzard
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since 02-09-2000
Posts 235


4 posted 02-13-2000 02:37 AM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

HOT DANG!!
The one that you have written this for must feel very special....I know I do,just because you have shared it with all of us.
I sure hope that we are able to see more writings from you.
Goood Job Raul

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
Posts 4587
Victoria, Australia


5 posted 02-15-2000 02:57 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Raul a big welcome to passions...great poem, I liked it very much     Tracie
HelmutB
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since 01-06-2000
Posts 989
Canada


6 posted 02-15-2000 05:20 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Welcome to passions
With such exceptional piece i shall add.
Wow this is nice

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

-DEE-
Junior Member
since 10-29-1999
Posts 14
SOUTH AFRICA


7 posted 02-15-2000 05:55 AM       View Profile for -DEE-   Email -DEE-   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for -DEE-

Very impressive!!  more..more I tell you!!

 I am me;
I am my soul;
I am not this body you see-
'tis merely the casing that carries me...
-DEE-
Dark Angel
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since 08-04-99
Posts 10270


8 posted 02-15-2000 06:54 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW Raul excellent piece especially loved these lines....

To you I bring
amidst these wings
a song of moonlit streams
and kisses sweet
of where we'll meet
if only in our dreams!

Welcome to passions!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Nan
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since 05-20-99
Posts 24426
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA


9 posted 02-15-2000 07:31 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very nice, indeed, Raul...

I'd like to formally welcome you to our Passionate world, and I look forward to reading more of your work.  This piece is delightful..
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


10 posted 02-15-2000 11:51 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I like this...welcome to passions  
CMGrimm
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since 02-14-2000
Posts 700
USA


11 posted 02-15-2000 12:02 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

A whole hearted welcome to passions, (although I'm very new hear myself.)
Welcome anyway, and keep submitting beautiful poems such as this.  I loved it.

Chris
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