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A wind of Dreams
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A wind of Dreams |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
A Wind of dreams The wind whispers softly across a silent pond It carries a message for all to hear Its musical voice softens all ears to its thoughts and dreams for us to share. Its message is simple Its dreams as well Friends are special. They fill the emptiness within our lives. The winds voice stretches far and wide Echoing its message for all time. I feel the wind now, wrapping me in its warm feeling Its soothing touch blows away all my fears. People have been searching for eternity for something to fill the emptiness in their hearts. In all that time of searching, the only thing that anyone has ever found to fill that spot... is each other. |
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Chris Goodman Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 92Issaquah, Washington usa |
Dawn! Hi, I hope your day is going well. This poem reads true. Only people can seperate warmth and lonliness. I love people & there are alot of special, unique people in this world I have yet to meet. Thanks for sharing. Chris Goodman Blue Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dawn Eclipse- Welcome to Passion's. Your poem says a lot about friends. Friends are the best present you can give yourself.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Right you are. Friends are needed, otherwise we might die of lonliness. Welcome to Passions, Dawn Eclipse. Joy |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I agree with you ... friends are special...check your email for a message! I like your poem and look forward to reading more from you...  |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Dawn- It was a surprise to see you post something, my friend! I'm glad you did, this is wonderful. Your words definitely ring true. Friends forever. *Krista Knutson* One lives in the hope of becoming a memory. ~*Antonio Porchia*~ |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Thank you all for the reply! I was bored today, and thought I'd try a post! Thanks again. Dawn Eclipse |
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Dusk Treader
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
I didn't expect to see ya posting here either Cassie, but I'm glad that you did! Excellent poem about an excellent subject. Hope to see a lot more of you around here! Come to Prose and post some of your work too, I know you have some so don't tell me you don't! In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Bored or not - come here anyway! This is a really great poem - and welcome. 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Very lovely poem. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Welcome Dawn, and thank you for allowing us to read this lovely poem. Hope to read more of you in the future. Chris |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I like this a lot.Keep it up!!!!! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I can feel myself floating in the wind!! excellent piece...welcome!!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
welcome....nice poem...wind and dreams....ahhhh....very nice |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
All we have is each other - for sure... Nicely said, Dawn Welcome to our Passionate world...  |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Great entrance into our circle of friends! Welcome, Dawn, to Passions! |
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Brent Hotchkin Junior Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 42Florida,USA |
Very cool!! I agree. eachother and love is all we need. I must look for more of yours |
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