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A wind of Dreams

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Dawn Eclipse
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A Wind of dreams


The wind whispers softly across a silent pond
It carries a message for all to hear
Its musical voice softens all ears
to its thoughts and dreams for us to share.

Its message is simple
Its dreams as well
Friends are special.
They fill the emptiness within our lives.

The winds voice stretches far and wide
Echoing its message for all time.
I feel the wind now, wrapping me in its warm feeling
Its soothing touch blows away all my fears.

People have been searching for eternity
for something to fill the emptiness in their hearts.
In all that time of searching, the only thing that anyone has ever found to fill that spot...
is each other.


© Copyright 2000 Cassandra Roseen - All Rights Reserved
Chris Goodman
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1 posted 02-12-2000 06:29 PM       View Profile for Chris Goodman   Email Chris Goodman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chris Goodman

Dawn!
Hi, I hope your day is going well.  This poem reads true.  Only people can seperate warmth and lonliness.  I love people & there are alot of special, unique people in this world I have yet to meet.  Thanks for sharing.

Chris Goodman


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2 posted 02-12-2000 06:31 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Dawn Eclipse-
Welcome to Passion's.
Your poem says a lot about friends.
Friends are the best present
you can give yourself.
~*Marge*~


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JOY 14
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3 posted 02-12-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

Right you are.  Friends are needed, otherwise we might die of lonliness.  Welcome to Passions, Dawn Eclipse.  

Joy
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4 posted 02-12-2000 06:43 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! I agree with you ... friends are special...check your email for a message! I like your poem and look forward to reading more from you...  
Alwye
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Dawn- It was a surprise to see you post something, my friend!  I'm glad you did, this is wonderful.  Your words definitely ring true.  Friends forever.  

 *Krista Knutson*

One lives in the hope of becoming a memory.
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Dawn Eclipse
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6 posted 02-12-2000 10:11 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Thank you all for the reply!  I was bored today, and thought I'd try a post!  Thanks again.  

Dawn Eclipse

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7 posted 02-13-2000 01:30 AM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

I didn't expect to see ya posting here either Cassie, but I'm glad that you did!  Excellent poem about an excellent subject.  Hope to see a lot more of you around here!  Come to Prose and post some of your work too, I know you have some so don't tell me you don't!  

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Severn
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8 posted 02-15-2000 08:19 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Bored or not - come here anyway! This is a really great poem - and welcome.

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life enriches writing'
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9 posted 02-15-2000 11:29 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Very lovely poem.
CMGrimm
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10 posted 02-15-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Welcome Dawn, and thank you for allowing us to read this lovely poem.  Hope to read more of you in the future.

Chris
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11 posted 02-16-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

I like this a lot.Keep it up!!!!!
devina
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12 posted 02-16-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I can feel myself floating in the wind!! excellent piece...welcome!!!!!

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welcome....nice poem...wind and dreams....ahhhh....very nice
Nan
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All we have is each other - for sure...
Nicely said, Dawn
Welcome to our Passionate world...
January Flowers
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Great entrance into our circle of friends!
Welcome, Dawn, to Passions!
Brent Hotchkin
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16 posted 02-19-2000 10:51 PM       View Profile for Brent Hotchkin   Email Brent Hotchkin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brent Hotchkin

Very cool!! I agree. eachother and love is all we need. I must look for more of yours
 
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