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What do you see?

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 02-12-2000 05:13 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

What do you see,
When you look in my eyes?
Is it such a surprise,
The way you hold me?
It was nothing at all
But there has to be a start
To get inside a heart
And it begins with a fall
Everything in life is a gamble
To succeed is to take a chance
Even in another romance
After love was in shambles
To toss me away
If that’s what you choose
Then you know you’d lose
Like the ending of the day
When you think of me,
Do you become unsure?
Or do you see your future?
Look into my eyes and see….

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INclan
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1 posted 02-12-2000 05:38 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

I like this one.  So? What color are your eyes?

INclan
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2 posted 03-24-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I think some more people need to look into these eyes  
Janet Marie
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3 posted 03-24-2000 11:59 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

What do you see,
When you look in my eyes?
Is it such a surprise,
The way you hold me?
It was nothing at all
But there has to be a start
To get inside a heart
And it begins with a fall
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LD...you read my mind tonight...(smile)

jer, this perfect...
stalking you and falling...
your jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

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