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Breath of Life

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 02-12-2000 03:28 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

If loving you is like a dream,
Then I donít want to wake
If hurting means youíll return,
Then itís a pain I can take

Nothing was expected
And itís all a big surprise
That you look up at me,
And I see my future in your eyes

I never knew you cared so much
Until I saw you shine
When you paused to smile
And said youíd never leave me behind

You make me happy,
And I want you to feel the same
You give me Heaven,
And Iím no longer ashamed

Until the last sunrise in this world
When we must wake up and leave,
Until that time comes,
You make me breathe

© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
Wizzard
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1 posted 02-12-2000 03:39 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Excellent job JML
You really have a way with word`s.
She is a very lucky lady to have someone care so deeply for her and show it.
Thank`s for sharing,again  

†Today is the first day of the rest of my life.




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PoeticKnight
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2 posted 02-12-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

thanks wizzard. she'll tell you that I am the lucky one. *S*
January Flowers
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...and just in time for Valentine's Day!
Lovely, lovely words, JML.
 
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