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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
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New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-02-12 03:28 PM


If loving you is like a dream,
Then I don’t want to wake
If hurting means you’ll return,
Then it’s a pain I can take

Nothing was expected
And it’s all a big surprise
That you look up at me,
And I see my future in your eyes

I never knew you cared so much
Until I saw you shine
When you paused to smile
And said you’d never leave me behind

You make me happy,
And I want you to feel the same
You give me Heaven,
And I’m no longer ashamed

Until the last sunrise in this world
When we must wake up and leave,
Until that time comes,
You make me breathe


© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
Wizzard
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since 2000-02-09
Posts 209

1 posted 2000-02-12 03:39 PM


Excellent job JML
You really have a way with word`s.
She is a very lucky lady to have someone care so deeply for her and show it.
Thank`s for sharing,again  < !signature-->

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.




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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA
2 posted 2000-02-12 03:45 PM


thanks wizzard. she'll tell you that I am the lucky one. *S*
January Flowers
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 209
South Carolina
3 posted 2000-02-12 04:54 PM


...and just in time for Valentine's Day!
Lovely, lovely words, JML.

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