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cK Navarro Junior Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 21Helsinki Finland |
You called my name and that´s how I came I felt the carving of my being in your heart where it said that we will never be too far apart for I will always remember you by heart. I listen but I donnot care what people say If it is their desire to judge me, then they may They can accuse me for not doing what I´ve been told But they donnot know nor have the power against the truth that I hold I refused to be changed by those who had not set me free For I wish to tell them that hey, it is God who created me. Only I can know what is best for me and only I can want where I wanna be for it is only I -equipped for my own destiny. I donnot chose the people who wish to walk with me in this journey For I have found the faith to believe that God has sent them to me So as you knocked in my door I saw innocence, simplicity and purity that must be cherished and not ignored For I can see the beauty of all creation and because I see, it is in my nature to give you my loving attention Our paths were brought together for a reason I may never know Maybe it holds a lesson, just by watching you grow Growing is about the experiences we´ve encountered in our lives and the knowledges we´ve earned through the mistakes we have learned For a man who keeps repeating his mistakes hasn´t grown For he has yet learned the things he have already known These are the things you must find But careful, you must not walk blind I will hand you what you need for I refuse to be the one to show you how a heart can bleed But oh the world would love to show it to you indeed For I heard you are a troubled child but no one can blame you for the world itself is so wild and no one can accuse you of doing something wrong For we are all are trying to find our place to belong We can only teach and tell you what we know But we donnot know what is right that´s the greatest mystery of this flight I believe your heart is better than mine for mine has darkened through the experiences I´ve made happened And I don´t think you´re too young for me for I donnot see myself greater than you nor you to me But I do believe you must be set free for there are still a lot of things you need to see that you will not find in me I´ll be your friend your needs I will attend through worlds without end |
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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
Nice poem. But it doesn't really belong in the "Publishing Tips" forum, so I'm moving it to Open Poetry. Also, it's not necessary to split longer poems into multiple posts, so I'm consolidating all three of your posts into one. Welcome to Passion, by the way!  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to passions... I like this! Check your email for a message!  |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
This kinda reminds me of the saying "If you love someone set them free,if they don`t come back,Hunt them down and shoot them." Did I get that one right?lol..just kiddin. On a real note: I can relate to this oh so well. Nice job cK Welcome to Passion. I look forward to seeing more of your writings. Today is the first day of the rest of my life. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Welsome to passions cK nice poem...very deep Tracie |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I liked this poem when I first saw it, and didn't get to comment at that time - Since then, I noticed you hailing us from Finland... I'd like to personally welcome you... Your poetry is very enjoyable... and your heritage holds a very near and dear place in my "Tuominen" heart...  Nancy |
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cK Navarro Junior Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 21Helsinki Finland |
Thank you Nancy, and all o´ya guys! You have lift my heart high. Nancy, Thank you for reading my poems. I´m glad to know that with you I exist beyond the screen, for you know well where I´m coming from. Nice that you´ve shared this information, surely I feel very welcomed. Thank you once more... Greetings from the Freezer (made in Finland) cK |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
cK~ Very nice. Hope your 'freezer' thaws soon.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Welcome to passions.Very nice poem |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Welcome to passions...You've made quite an entrance with this lovely piece. I hope to see more of you in the future. Chris. Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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