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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
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0 posted 2000-02-12 02:09 PM


She smiles with sweetest serenity
As a tear traces a trail upon her cheek
And silver moonlight catches fire
The moment is golden treasure in time
If only I could remember; to recall
With total clarity as such things in reality
Fade from mental thoughts to be forgotten
But remembered in the heart’s eternal vault

It is human to wish for impossible things
To breathe with another’s breath
And to long for certain moments of quiet peace
That, like tricks of the mind,
Are sometimes imagined, sometimes presupposed

She likes a nice surprise once in a while
She likes little things in life that
Are easily forced, yet hard to come by
She waits for things to work out right and,
She waits patiently for me

I want to speak with her voice
See with her eyes
And I want to smile
With her smile


© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
Wizzard
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since 2000-02-09
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1 posted 2000-02-12 02:15 PM


Sounds like she`s a very special person.
It would be refreshing to see thing`s thru another`s eye`s.
You`ve done an excellent job with your wording here. JML.
Thank`s for sharing

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-02-12 02:17 PM


JML-
This is certainly a loving tribute
to someone who has placed her smile
in your heart.

~*Marge*~




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Poet deVine
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3 posted 2000-02-12 02:33 PM


Beautifully said! I like this.  

Buffpimp
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since 2000-01-23
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4 posted 2000-02-13 12:17 PM


All I can say about this poem is that WOW!  This poem is really good.  She is lucky to have a guy like you.  Now only if i was appreciated.  

PoeticKnight
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5 posted 2000-02-14 10:18 AM


Buff, you are appreciated by me for saying such nice things. Thanks.
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 2000-02-14 10:53 AM


Seems to me someone is very much in love and there's one lucky girl out there somewhere  
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