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My Thought`s on Passion ( is this better?)

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Wizzard
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0 posted 02-12-2000 01:13 AM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Wizzard

So many different post
and many are quite the same,
Still a friendly place
where every body knows your name,
Some will make you laugh
until you hurt inside,
Other`s will tell everything
with nothing left to hide,
No matter how your feeling
Good,happy or bad,
Your friend`s here in Passion
Will never leave you Sad.
                                        

Sorry everyone,I know that this doesn`t really do those here in Passion justice but It`s all I could come up with for now...




 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.




[This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-12-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Wizzard - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 02-12-2000 01:19 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Wizard - another nice poem - you are right, passions is definitely the place to be!  I hope you are still smiling ..... Roniece ....
Wizzard
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2 posted 02-12-2000 01:22 AM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Yes Mam,
From ear to ear..lol
Thank you for your kind reply Roniece


 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 02-12-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Looking forward to reading more of your work Wizard !           ....... Roniece ......

mmm, can you please tell me how to get the smiley face happening? I can't work it out for the life of me!!! LOL
devina
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4 posted 02-12-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Where everybody knows your name...reminds me of Cheers...maybe the day will come where we can all sit down and share a cold one!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Wizzard
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5 posted 02-12-2000 01:41 AM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Devina,
that was my thought as well when I wrote that part...that`s a great show


Roniece,when you post a reply,scroll down a little and you`ll see,
"Available Smilies"
well the little things on the left of the smiles are what you want to put on your post and it will come out as the smile beside it..
I hope this help`s you?

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 02-12-2000 01:46 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

AH!!!!!!!  now I know!!             
)   THANK YOU!       .... Roniece ....  xx
Wizzard
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7 posted 02-12-2000 01:52 AM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Kicking feet back and forth
aaawww shuck`s  
dem xx`s really got me  
LoL....your welcome Miss Mam  

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 02-12-2000 02:04 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Now I'm the one who's smiling here Wizzard !

                          

Roniece
Wizzard
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9 posted 02-12-2000 02:37 AM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Roniece,
any time that I can give someone a smile,I can smile myself.
Your a sweety.
Thank you for being so kind.    

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.




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Mistikman
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10 posted 02-12-2000 03:10 AM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

Some of us like passions a little to much   I think we should start PA-Passions Anonymous  
Seriously though, cool poem, and I agree that last line could use a little work. If you are having trouble finding a rhyming word, check out this page: http://www.link.cs.cmu.edu/cgi-bin/dougb/rhyme.cgi

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

Beki
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11 posted 02-12-2000 04:24 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Maybe "that you came are really glad" ? awkward I know.....

or "a smile to your face will add"?

or "will never make you mad"?

SIGH...harder than it ought to be! But hey, I liked the poem!  
Wizzard
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12 posted 02-12-2000 12:44 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Mistik,Beki,
Thank you for your help and replies.
I have edited this and I hope it does a little more justice to those here in Passion?
I know it could still use a little more work but sometime`s my mind draw`s a blank

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
Tasi
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13 posted 02-12-2000 01:07 PM       View Profile for Tasi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tasi

Truly a fun place to be and wonderful to share your work with others who can appreciate it   I believe you said it all Wizzard !!

Tasi  
Michael
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14 posted 02-12-2000 02:44 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

There's always justice in truth, Wizzard and there is much truth in this verse.  As a member of Passions I thank you.  Your contributions in poetry as well as support and friendship are what Passions is all about.


michael
tracie66
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15 posted 02-13-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Wizzard you did well, an excellent tribute we all thanks you           Tracie
Wizzard
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16 posted 02-13-2000 04:23 AM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Taci and Tracie I want to thank you both for your input,replies and support.
It`s the replies that makes Passion so special.
Thank you both  

Michael,
Buddy I feel for you,Damn do I feel for you.
I sure as heck hope all work`s out with you two....no matter what happens,DONT GIVE UP ON YOUR FRIENDS HERE AT PASSION...OK?
KEEP YOUR HEAD UP BUD.

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

 
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