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Love's Embrace
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Love's Embrace |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA 
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Love's Embrace Sparks between The lovers fly Lightning flashes Through the sky Silence shattered With thunder's roar He loves her Like never before Needing her close Pulling her near Tender kisses To quell her fear He lays her back Upon the ground Their sighs lost In nature's sound Tempest swells In swirling skies They find themselves In each other's eyes Passion spent They lay undressed Murmuring softly With each caress Drowning in Each other's gaze Lovers swathed In evening haze Night falls As storm rages on In love's embrace They await the dawn < !signature--> It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley [This message has been edited by Tara Simms (edited 02-13-2000).] |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
WOW!!! this sure gave me one heck of a visual  Kinda hard for me to think with this BIG SMILE in my mind .... Very Very Good Tara. Thank`s for the smiles  < !signature-->Today is the first day of the rest of my life. [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-11-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tara- This is absolutely sensual. So lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your not so subtle nuances make this poem a very pleasurable read, indeed... Nicely done, Tara...  |
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startin_fresh Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 137US |
Tara: You sure know how to stir the heart and get it racing. Wonderful! Shawn Courage is the price that life exacts for granting peace with yourself. --Amelia Earhart |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Tara, (sigh) What I wouldn't give to be held in that kind of embrace! Beautiful; I especially like the metaphor of the storm describing the escalating passion between the lovers. Jeff |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
WOW!!! Tara, this is great - the words flowed beautifully, the visual was wonderful! Keep smiling......... Roniece ..... mmm Wizard, have you stopped smiling yet?? LOL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Tara I like this...I mean I really like it. Such a beautiful romantic flow. james |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Yep, I agree with the rest...This is so passionately romantic...LOVED IT!!! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Very expressive work Tara. I enjoyed this passionate storm! Claire |
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Tasi Junior Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 38Canada |
sensual,tender-hearted and passionate to say the least... great poem Tara |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I definitely agree with the above comments. You used just the right touch of sensuality and feeling into this one to make it alive. Very nice work. |
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cK Navarro Junior Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 21Helsinki Finland |
I like this one, this one´s above the ground and floating on the air. pretty neat expressions! you´ve got the touch of it, don´t lose it! sensational!!! way to go!!! -C- |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
I'm blushing guys! Thank you for the overwhelming response. Balladeer and Nan, glad to know I didn't cross over the line. I didn't want this one in Adult. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Tara, I echo all of the above. This was very good. Imagery - great.  |
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blueyz75 Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 138IL |
VERY SEDUCTIVE! nuff said! Kel I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Eloise and Kelly, thank you for your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem! It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very passionate work Tara |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Tara, absolutly beautiful, and such a vivid image it puts in my mind. bravo! Parker |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Tara! Denise |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Not sure how this one got past me the first go-round....I usually wouldn't miss this type of poem. Very well written, I loved it. Very descriptive....very. Thanks for a GREAT read. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Great poem. so intense. Flows so well almost sings itself. Love it. Rich |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Rich, Chris, Denise and Parker: Thank you for reading and enjoying my poem. Your enthusiasm is greatly appreciated by this poet! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tara, this is beautiful. Very hot but not overdone. Really liked this! -SEA |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Stirring, to say the least. Whew, need a breather after that one. Always did enjoy a storm. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful words, Tara. Honestly made my heart ache. I hope I can experience love like that someday. Michael |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
A treat for the senses as well as the heart..very nice! |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
wow loved this.....was looking around for you and found I had missed this, it is beautiful..wow..... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Soft and tender Loving and passionate And a storm raging within Very well done, Tara PS, and it rhymes, too! Liz |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
A blast from the past. Thanks for reviving it, Corazon. You really had to dig for this one. Elizabeth, thank you, ma'am. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Most romantic! Liked it very much |
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