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Love's Embrace

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Tara Simms
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0 posted 02-11-2000 11:27 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Love's Embrace

Sparks between
The lovers fly
Lightning flashes
Through the sky

Silence shattered
With thunder's roar
He loves her
Like never before

Needing her close
Pulling her near
Tender kisses
To quell her fear

He lays her back
Upon the ground
Their sighs lost
In nature's sound

Tempest swells
In swirling skies
They find themselves
In each other's eyes

Passion spent
They lay undressed
Murmuring softly
With each caress

Drowning in
Each other's gaze
Lovers swathed
In evening haze

Night falls
As storm rages on
In love's embrace
They await the dawn



 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley




[This message has been edited by Tara Simms (edited 02-13-2000).]
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Wizzard
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1 posted 02-11-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

WOW!!!
this sure gave me one heck of a visual  
Kinda hard for me to think with this BIG SMILE in my mind ....
Very Very Good Tara.
Thank`s for the smiles  

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.


[This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-11-2000).]
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 02-11-2000 11:43 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tara-
This is absolutely sensual.
So lovely.
~*Marge*~


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Nan
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3 posted 02-11-2000 11:52 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Your not so subtle nuances make this poem a very pleasurable read, indeed... Nicely done, Tara...
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4 posted 02-12-2000 12:10 AM       View Profile for startin_fresh   Email startin_fresh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for startin_fresh

Tara:

You sure know how to stir the heart and get it racing. Wonderful!

Shawn

 Courage is the price that life exacts
for granting peace with yourself.
--Amelia Earhart


rascalx
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5 posted 02-12-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for rascalx   Email rascalx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit rascalx's Home Page   View IP for rascalx

Tara,
    (sigh) What I wouldn't give to be held in that kind of embrace! Beautiful; I especially like the metaphor of the storm describing the escalating passion between the lovers.
                                Jeff
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 02-12-2000 01:25 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

WOW!!!  Tara, this is great - the words flowed beautifully, the visual was wonderful!
Keep smiling......... Roniece .....

mmm Wizard, have you stopped smiling yet?? LOL
JamesMichael
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7 posted 02-12-2000 06:30 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Tara I like this...I mean I really like it.
Such a beautiful romantic flow.   james
moonmoon
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Yep, I agree with the rest...This is so passionately romantic...LOVED IT!!!
Meadowmuse
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9 posted 02-12-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Very expressive work Tara. I enjoyed this passionate storm!

Claire
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10 posted 02-12-2000 12:08 PM       View Profile for Tasi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tasi

sensual,tender-hearted and passionate to  say the least... great poem Tara
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11 posted 02-12-2000 08:36 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I definitely agree with the above comments. You used just the right touch of sensuality and feeling into this one to make it alive. Very nice work.
cK Navarro
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12 posted 02-12-2000 09:59 PM       View Profile for cK Navarro   Email cK Navarro   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cK Navarro

I like this one, this one´s above the ground and floating on the air. pretty neat expressions! you´ve got the touch of it, don´t lose it! sensational!!!
              
                  way to go!!!
                     -C-
Tara Simms
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13 posted 02-12-2000 11:32 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

I'm blushing guys!  Thank you for the overwhelming response.

Balladeer and Nan, glad to know I didn't cross over the line.  I didn't want this one in Adult.


 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


Eloise
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14 posted 02-12-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Tara, I echo all of the above. This was very good.  Imagery - great.  
blueyz75
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15 posted 02-13-2000 04:53 PM       View Profile for blueyz75   Email blueyz75   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit blueyz75's Home Page   View IP for blueyz75

VERY SEDUCTIVE!  nuff said!

Kel


 I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman

Tara Simms
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16 posted 02-14-2000 06:15 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Eloise and Kelly, thank you for your comments.  I'm glad you enjoyed the poem!

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


hoot_owl_rn
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17 posted 02-15-2000 09:01 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very passionate work Tara  
Parker
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18 posted 02-16-2000 11:40 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Tara, absolutly beautiful, and such a vivid image it puts in my mind. bravo!

Parker
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19 posted 02-17-2000 12:21 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Tara!  

Denise
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Not sure how this one got past me the first go-round....I usually wouldn't miss this type of poem.  
Very well written, I loved it.  Very descriptive....very.


Thanks for a GREAT read.

Chris


 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
spiked
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21 posted 02-17-2000 12:37 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Great poem.
so intense. Flows so well almost sings itself.
Love it.
Rich
Tara Simms
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22 posted 02-17-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Rich, Chris, Denise and Parker:  Thank you for reading and enjoying my poem.  Your enthusiasm is greatly appreciated by this poet!
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23 posted 02-17-2000 03:00 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Tara, this is beautiful. Very hot but not overdone. Really liked this!   -SEA
January Flowers
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24 posted 02-17-2000 03:04 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Stirring, to say the least.
Whew, need a breather after that one.
Always did enjoy a storm.
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