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mini poet
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0 posted 02-11-2000 09:21 PM       View Profile for mini poet   Email mini poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit mini poet's Home Page   View IP for mini poet

Teddy


I  have  a  little  teddy
that  i  sleep  with  every  night
Whenever  Iím  not  in  my  room
I  keep  her  out  of  sight
~
Sheís  not  just  any  teddy
she  takes  a  lot  of  care
I  keep  her  hidden  in  my  room
but  Iíll  never  tell  you  where
~
When  ever  Iím  back  in  my  room
I  run  to  sneak  her  out
If  I  went  a  day  without  her
I  would  really  really  pout
~
My  mom  knows  where  I  hide  her
and  I  often  catch  her  there
For  once  upon  a  time
it  was  her  little  teddy  bear
~~~
© Copyright 2000 Jennifer E McCoy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-11-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Very Sweet
This one put a big smile on my face.
Thank you Mini.

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
bobbycat
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2 posted 02-11-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

awww......this melted my heart, and the ending was a nice twist.     I loved it.  

Bobbycat =^..^=
HelmutB
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3 posted 02-11-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Sweet so sweet the poem you shared
So for Teddy mom also cared
I like the way you do and say
That you love your Teddy in every way
Thank you for sharing this poem


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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4 posted 02-11-2000 11:40 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

MiniPoet-
This is just adorable.
What a whimsical look at your Teddy.
~*Marge*~


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mini poet
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5 posted 02-12-2000 09:41 AM       View Profile for mini poet   Email mini poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit mini poet's Home Page   View IP for mini poet

Thankyou, I'm glad you like my poem
I try to comment on other peoples poems
but my dad has to help

Jenn
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6 posted 02-12-2000 04:36 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Another wonderful poem Jenn. I love the way it ends  
January Flowers
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7 posted 02-12-2000 04:44 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Touching, mini.
Teddy Bear havens are always a welcomed comfort.
Personally, I enjoy a "tattered dog" haven
with my children.
Enjoyed this much.
jascanvey
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8 posted 02-12-2000 08:05 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

This is really sweet. It has brought a smile to my face with all the memories of my favourite teddy! Thanks  
Wizzard
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9 posted 02-12-2000 08:18 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Mini,
I find your post to this poem as touching as the poem it self... It`s nice to see a Dad help his daughter and or son with anything that they find interest in.
My hat`s off to DAD.  





†Today is the first day of the rest of my life.


[This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-12-2000).]
Rex Allen McCoy
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10 posted 02-13-2000 04:59 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Thankyou Wizzard ... her dad is quite proud of her

Rex}<{{{{o>


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!

Rex Allen McCoy
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11 posted 02-25-2000 02:24 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

How about one more trip down the slide
before you hit the trunk
... Up you go ...
 
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