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mini poet Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 56Canada 
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Teddy I have a little teddy that i sleep with every night Whenever I’m not in my room I keep her out of sight ~ She’s not just any teddy she takes a lot of care I keep her hidden in my room but I’ll never tell you where ~ When ever I’m back in my room I run to sneak her out If I went a day without her I would really really pout ~ My mom knows where I hide her and I often catch her there For once upon a time it was her little teddy bear ~~~ |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Very Sweet  This one put a big smile  on my face.Thank you Mini. Today is the first day of the rest of my life. |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
awww......this melted my heart, and the ending was a nice twist.  I loved it. Bobbycat =^..^= |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Sweet so sweet the poem you shared So for Teddy mom also cared I like the way you do and say That you love your Teddy in every way Thank you for sharing this poem The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MiniPoet- This is just adorable. What a whimsical look at your Teddy. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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mini poet Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 56Canada |
Thankyou, I'm glad you like my poem I try to comment on other peoples poems but my dad has to help Jenn |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Another wonderful poem Jenn. I love the way it ends |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Touching, mini. Teddy Bear havens are always a welcomed comfort. Personally, I enjoy a "tattered dog" haven with my children. Enjoyed this much. |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
This is really sweet. It has brought a smile to my face with all the memories of my favourite teddy! Thanks  |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Mini, I find your post to this poem as touching as the poem it self... It`s nice to see a Dad help his daughter and or son with anything that they find interest in. My hat`s off to DAD.  < !signature--> Today is the first day of the rest of my life. [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-12-2000).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thankyou Wizzard ... her dad is quite proud of her Rex}<{{{{o> I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
How about one more trip down the slide before you hit the trunk ... Up you go ... |
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