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demoninlove
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Dehradun

0 posted 2000-02-11 09:01 PM


Hello All,
My name is Deepak Menon and I have one volume of English Poetry Published by Minerva Press called Tamam Shudh - Poems of Passion.
I have entered the forum for the first time today and hope I shall find the kind of friends I crave here : I am posting a Sonnet I wrote - which I hope you all will like
                SONNET - SOAR ON GOSSAMER WINGS
Beweeping the state of things to come when day ends
In stupor when I do lie in fulsome emptiness profound
With mind and restless soul draped in sorrows liniments
Watching the movements complete the inevitable round
And comes into the emptiness a hint of a whisper of voice
Deftly, gently, intruding like a needle into sanguine flesh
Demanding, insistent, opening new avenues of choice
A singing of angel's whispers appearing this stone to bless
And hope awakens to lift sorrow's cloak a little while
And flickers in the darkness some mysterious light
And invisibly a wispy manifestation of innocent guile
Opens little windows of sunshine tantalisingly bright
    Then does soar into the firmament on gossamer  wings
    My awakened soul seeking anew the mystery of things

mY wEBPAGE IS : http://mail.indiatimes.com/indiatimes/users/demoninlove



 

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1 posted 2000-02-11 09:05 PM


Welcome, Deepak.
You will greatly enjoy being here among friends.
Nice poetry.  I will visit your web page.
Passion's poets welcome you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-06-30 09:45 AM


And now, Deepak, I find you are PUBLISHED! And I received a compliment from you? I am deeply humbled...so perhaps, someday, I may be published too? I may only hope...

until then, I will visit your website and see what treasures you have to offer, and from the looks of it, I will be very, very happy indeed!

Regards,


Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


kelieth
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3 posted 2000-07-02 12:49 PM


Beautiful sonnet for all to see.  The heart that lies within thee.  I look forward to reading more posts.  From your the your enchanting voice.  

Tis a pleasure to see such grace.  Thus I welcome your smiling face.  

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

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