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demoninlove
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0 posted 02-11-2000 09:01 PM       View Profile for demoninlove   Email demoninlove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for demoninlove

Hello All,
My name is Deepak Menon and I have one volume of English Poetry Published by Minerva Press called Tamam Shudh - Poems of Passion.
I have entered the forum for the first time today and hope I shall find the kind of friends I crave here : I am posting a Sonnet I wrote - which I hope you all will like
                SONNET - SOAR ON GOSSAMER WINGS
Beweeping the state of things to come when day ends
In stupor when I do lie in fulsome emptiness profound
With mind and restless soul draped in sorrows liniments
Watching the movements complete the inevitable round
And comes into the emptiness a hint of a whisper of voice
Deftly, gently, intruding like a needle into sanguine flesh
Demanding, insistent, opening new avenues of choice
A singing of angel's whispers appearing this stone to bless
And hope awakens to lift sorrow's cloak a little while
And flickers in the darkness some mysterious light
And invisibly a wispy manifestation of innocent guile
Opens little windows of sunshine tantalisingly bright
    Then does soar into the firmament on gossamer  wings
    My awakened soul seeking anew the mystery of things

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 02-11-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Welcome, Deepak.
You will greatly enjoy being here among friends.
Nice poetry.  I will visit your web page.
Passion's poets welcome you.
~*Marge*~


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2 posted 06-30-2000 09:45 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

And now, Deepak, I find you are PUBLISHED! And I received a compliment from you? I am deeply humbled...so perhaps, someday, I may be published too? I may only hope...

until then, I will visit your website and see what treasures you have to offer, and from the looks of it, I will be very, very happy indeed!

Regards,


Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

kelieth
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3 posted 07-02-2000 12:49 PM       View Profile for kelieth   Email kelieth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit kelieth's Home Page   View IP for kelieth

Beautiful sonnet for all to see.  The heart that lies within thee.  I look forward to reading more posts.  From your the your enchanting voice.  

Tis a pleasure to see such grace.  Thus I welcome your smiling face.  

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."
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