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Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
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0 posted 2000-02-11 07:17 PM


I'm scared
I'm hurt
I'm angry
I'm mad
I'm sick
I'm sore
I'm sorry
I'm sad

I ache
I scream
I bleed
I cry
I ask
I tell
I run
I try

It's his
It's hers
It's theirs
It's mine
It's good
It's bad
It's wrong
It's fine

I won
I lost
I stand
I sit
I can
I can't
I fall
I QUIT



 I'm not waving, i'm drowning!

[This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 02-11-2000).]

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-02-11 07:19 PM


Echo~  I'm here~ I care~ It's ok~ I know~

Hugs to you sweetie! -SEA

Rosalind Palafox
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Posts 88

2 posted 2000-02-11 07:19 PM


I wonder.....
(good poem)


 "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with."

fool
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since 2000-02-07
Posts 61

3 posted 2000-02-11 07:56 PM


You say so much with so few words,
well done,good poem.

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