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A lovers dream

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Breathe~
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0 posted 02-11-2000 06:44 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Breathe~

As the fire fades
the shadows struggle to cloak the room
remaining golden fingers stretch tentatively
to caress the sleeping woman
through the open window
a frigid breeze disturbs the curtains
and the moonlight seizes it's opportunity
to join the firelights embrace
dancing across her skin in brilliant color...

Oblivious
she sleeps on
fast within her dream
locked in her own intimate dance
within the arms of her dream lover..

Like a wonderous mystery
he slips in like a tantalizing phantom
capturing her every night
twirling her endlessly under the stars
his face unknown
his name unspoken...

the cool night air ruffles her sheets
icey bumps rising from her flesh
as she shifts
sheets sliding down her arms
fingertips soft
and he gently removes her strap
replacing it with a kiss
drawing her near
tasting of her
pressed against him
breathless
she feels his need...

desire sighs echo
she pulls him closer
taking her pillow in her arms
molding herself to his strength
blankets sliding between velvet perfection
entangling her
arching
murmuring
she moans softly...

winters grasp invading
as icey fingers slide along her face
she trembles when he kisses her
sliding a velvet rose into her hair
warmth caresses her ear... "Tomorrow... my love"

reaching for him
her fingers grasping only his memory
whispers fading as she awakes...

sighing
she stares out into the night sky
with half lidded eyes
Brushing at something upon her cheek
she sends it into flight
her eyes closing
to a dreamless sleep

as a tiny red petal glides quietly to the floor...




 Freedom of expression is the watch word...

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1 posted 02-11-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Breathe~BRAVO!!!!!! I saw it so clear in my mind, like a memory. This is fantastic!-SEA
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what a dream!

 "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with."
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3 posted 02-11-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

with dreams like that, who needs reality..????   Excellent job.  

Bobbycat =^..^=
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4 posted 02-12-2000 01:46 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

Thank you SEA!  *grin*

Rosalind....more like a fantasy... )

Bobbycat...*L*  There is a lot to be said for real human touch though... )

Thanks....


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5 posted 02-12-2000 02:01 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Breathe~
This is flawlessly sensual.
Such beauteous thoughts of a dream
worth going to sleep for.
Gal, this is just WONDERFUL !
Here's to more luscious dreams
to be shared with us !
GO TO SLEEP !
NITE-NITE !  
You're getting sleepy !  
~*Marge*~



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This is so lovely!
Like a novel you hate to put down
and wish would continue
until the next dream.
Touched my senses, thanks!
Breathe~
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Marge

*LOL*  If we could dream like that every night!  None of us would EVER get out of bed...and then...who would share their poetry?  And who would read it?....*grin*

January flowers...I LOVE your name!   )
Thank you so much for your comments...


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...

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Absolutely stunning! What a dream..I especially love the ending...beautiful work!  

 *Krista Knutson*

One lives in the hope of becoming a memory.
~*Antonio Porchia*~
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9 posted 02-13-2000 01:13 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This one went down like chocolate ice-cream.
A fabulous read, sensual, pure satin...
Breathe~
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Alwye...Why...thank you!... )

serenity...chocolate ice cream?  I think that has to be one of the best remarks I have had...I LOVE chocolate ice cream!  *grin*  Thank you!


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...

 
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