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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 02-11-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Wanting to end this silence
I talked with you my friends
and as the Stars gathered round
I began the story with no end

Halfway through my tale
Mr Moon shone down at my side
told me he was listening
to think of him as my guide

Slowly the hours went by
little stars yawned in sleep
but the moon kept on shining
he said he was earning his keep

The magic in my eyes said it all
myriads of flickering lights
and when I looked around again
my world seemed incredibly bright

The chill that had been with me
was replaced with something new
as the voice of the youngest star
spoke up astonished at his debut

"if the rain stopped trying to cry
and the sun forgot to dry his tears
our lights could never follow you
and guide you through the years"

As Rainbow and Stars quietly listened
Mr Moon shone with his wisdom and said

"Live life with all of your heart
love with honour can hold no regrets
we'll always light the way ahead
however dark your life may seem to get"

and so I travel on my new road...

Love you all

HUGS




†Ouvrir mon coeur et ‚me



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 02-11-2000).]
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RG~ you are so talented....I loved this! How inspiring! -SEA
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Beautiful, RG!!! May whatever road you travel be lit with your smiles... may you never lack the company and comfort of friends...  may every day's end find you dreaming peacefully... and every morning find you eager for another day!
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May the stars at night
Be your guiding light
May the toughts you keep
Be in your heart so deep
Your poem so nice it's done
May Mr Moon Shine bring you the one
Thank you Rainbow


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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4 posted 02-11-2000 10:20 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Beautifully said, Rainbow.   
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RainbowGirl-
You have been touched by a
magical muse in this one, dear.
As pretty as I've ever read.

That old moon is still such an
inspiration, isn't it?
Doesn't hurt to have it adorned
with stars and a little rainbow
sprinkled with a raindrop.
May your road be 'yellow-bricked'.

LOL ! at Balladeer's
'grinning like a Cheshire Cat' smiley !
~*Marge*~



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You've set this one well m'dear...with the moon, the stars, the rain...

Glad to see things looking up for you...keep the smiles in your pocket for the journey along that road!!!


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Just keep on smiling, RG...
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8 posted 02-13-2000 11:15 AM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

RG your talent never ceases to amaze me. Your beauty shines inside and out. Very inspiring piece.
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Beautiful .So inspiring,May this new road bring you love,peace and happiness.I miss not talking to you everyday.
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Lovely! I like the image of those little stars getting sleepy! May every journey you take end at the rainbow of your dreams...  
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beautiful rainbow, and I hope each footstep brings you smiles  
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Very wise words my friend  
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Ah, Rainbow, this is so beautiful! Very lovely!  

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Bless you for all your comments, means a lot to me...

HUGS

 Ouvrir mon coeur et ‚me
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