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A walk in the sun
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A walk in the sun |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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(This is a repost) A Walk in The Sun Shallowing in a tropic sea Gathering antiquity's birth I dawdle in serenity. The body warms in sundry rays From whimsy's sip of mental mirth A tea baptismal in the waves. Absorbed in my temerity Left high and dry from neap's full worth I steep in rare exotic tea. Sacrosanct and minuscule. With inquiries of a fool. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Well I got my suit, snorkle and fins, where is this place. Oh, yes I got my favorite tea cup too. Such nice imagination Seymour< !signature--> The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. [This message has been edited by HelmutB (edited 02-11-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful work Seymore  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour- Only you would use the 'neaps' and remind me of the midway tides so affected by the moon that I love to write about. My, how I'm fascinated. You continue to amaze me. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
From Sy's poetry I always reap A wealth of new words such as "neap" To many this word's within reach But I live far from any beach So to my dictionary I ran To try to keep up with this man But that's impossible! (In fact,I had to look up a couple. I'm quite ignorant) But the poem is reminscent of many days along other shores. Very lovely, Sy Love ya Liz |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah, serene and lovely! In this fastpaced world, we need a poem like this..  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Helmut, Thank you, I'll let you know the next time I go. Hoot, Thanks for the wonderful. *L* Marge, And may the neap tide not leave you high and dry. *L* Elizabeth, You are the sweetest and the best. Love Sy Poet deVine, If you lived down here we could walk together. *L* |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
What I wouldn't give for a nice "dawdle in serenity" right now, Sy. Great poem, I could feel the warmth on my face. Michael |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Delicious poem, absolutely delicious! Corinne |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Lovely poem Sy. Thanks for reposting it |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Michael, Beautiful comment, thank you much. Corinne, Thank you for the delicious. Munda, Thank you for the nice comment. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Oceanic sound Remands to me The wisdom of the deep. Resurgent pound A heark'ning sea In surfeit at its neap ~~~ as is your poetry, my friend...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Your lovely comment just made my evening *L* |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So serene and lovely...a feast for the mind.. *Krista Knutson* One lives in the hope of becoming a memory. ~*Antonio Porchia*~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This transported me to seaside...thank you for the elevation. Claire |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Seymour! I can relate to this! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Serenely painted Sey! ahhhhhh<*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alwye, Thank you for the serene. Meadow, You welcome for the elevation. Denice, Glad to see you back again. *L* Wht Dove, Thank you Dove. *L* |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey there Sy - missed ya!! Well, only you would use the word neap - yep, only you! And of course it works well. Quite a lovely poem I must say. How are you anyway? K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn, So happy to hear from you. How are you and how have you been, I missed you. Thanks for the wonderful comment. *L* Sy |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sy, I am just fine my friend and have missed you too. Thanks for the welcome home! Hugs. K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
like the style! |
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