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Twice Broken Heart

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Mistikman
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0 posted 02-11-2000 06:07 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mistikman

Why does it have to be so hard?
Why can't she just say yes?
Ever since I fell for her spell,
My life has been a mess.

Her smile could move mountains.
Brilliant eyes, make me blush.
When she enters my sight,
My heart does turn to mush.

What has caused these endless feelings,
From which I can't escape?
Invading my mind, thoughts of her,
Leaving me poor of shape.

When I asked her to go out,
Her answer, it was No.
My heart did die that day,
Blood from which did free flow.

Again I did pledge her my heart,
More forceful than before,
And again she did not want me,
To love her any more.

Now with heart twice broken,
I will try once again.
May this time it be Yes.
Happy will I be then.

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

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fool
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1 posted 02-11-2000 06:12 PM       View Profile for fool   Email fool   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fool

Hope and heartbreak together in this poem,
I really liked it  
Craig
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2 posted 02-11-2000 07:14 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig


This one I like, I can't wait until you teach me meter!!  

Craig

 Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.

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3 posted 02-11-2000 07:14 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Keep hoping..and while you're doing that, don't forget to keep your eyes open... you never know when someone is standing behind you waiting for you to notice her!  Good poem!  
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4 posted 02-11-2000 07:18 PM       Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Rosalind Palafox

You know a guy once had to try say, oh like uh.., 30 times and i ended up saying yes and i still love him to this day! The best love is love knowing that the other really desires the other and makes that person overjoyed...good poem  

 "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with."
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5 posted 02-11-2000 07:24 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Mistikman~ you are just so sweet. I am keeping my fingers crossed for you! Good luck! If it doesn't work out with her, you can bet there will be plenty to appreciate all your efforts......do keep your eyes open. -SEA
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6 posted 02-11-2000 07:33 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

fool- Thanks  

Craig- hehe, is my meter actually correct on this one? wow  

Poet deVine- Yea I know, but right now I cant seem to think of anyone but her. *sigh* I hope this works  

Rosalind Palafox- hehe, a reason for me to not give up hope!  

SEA- Thanks for the support   Maybe you are right. Would be nice  

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

 
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