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Getting Over You

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Danny Holloway
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               Getting Over You

           Staring into empty spaces
              feeling so blue
                 days after losing you

           Lost in these daydreams
              voices of past
                plans I thought would last

            Nights that seem unending
               restless, tossing, turning
                  haunted by constant yearning

            Sitting in a lonely room
                thoughts of happiness we knew
                   before having to get over you

            Where do wounded hearts go
                 to recover from the pain
                    come in from endless rain

            In a world without you
                 and the love that was there
                   is there another someday to care

            Days to night, nights to day
                  when will hurting be through
                      wanting soon, to be getting over you.
                          
                      



 



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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 02-11-2000 05:32 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Danny...this is hauntingly sad. You write far too little you know that don't you? Nice job with this.
Ruth
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Danny, this poem just works. It reads like a soft, slow song. Verrry nice.

Claire
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Danny, your poem is just lovely...I've just recently went through the same thing...but my problem was the same as yours...don't keep remembering ONLY the good times...remember the bad as well- then it's a little easier to understand why things didn't work...although it doesn't stop the pain...(sending you a hug to help you through!)

Hang in there m'friend...you obviously deserve better!!!


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vandana
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4 posted 02-11-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

nice words of this poem,I like it very work.Keep it up.
just_another_fe
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I LIKE THIS POEM   IM KINDA GOING THROUGH THE SAME THING RIGHT NOW. I THINK WHERE YOU SAID "THOUGHT OF HAPPINESS WE KNEW" MAYBE THOUGHTS OF HJAPPINESS WE ONCE KNEW  ????  I DUNNO THATS JUST WHAT I THINK BUT ANY HOW ITS A GREAT POEM. I HOPE YOU GET THROUGH THIS I KNOW ITS HARD.
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6 posted 02-11-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Danny-
This is really sentimental.
I very much like the way you
laid it out.  
Hugs to you, my friend.
Love ~*Marge*~


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Danny - this is a nice piece - your words flow freely and easily - I hope you get to smile again soon .........Roniece.......
Shelley
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Danny,
Very nice. Would like to know the story behind this one.  It's so sad, but I'm sure it had a happy ending.  

Shell
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