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Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

0 posted 2000-02-11 04:56 PM

               Getting Over You

           Staring into empty spaces
              feeling so blue
                 days after losing you

           Lost in these daydreams
              voices of past
                plans I thought would last

            Nights that seem unending
               restless, tossing, turning
                  haunted by constant yearning

            Sitting in a lonely room
                thoughts of happiness we knew
                   before having to get over you

            Where do wounded hearts go
                 to recover from the pain
                    come in from endless rain

            In a world without you
                 and the love that was there
                   is there another someday to care

            Days to night, nights to day
                  when will hurting be through
                      wanting soon, to be getting over you.



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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 2000-02-11 05:32 PM

Danny...this is hauntingly sad. You write far too little you know that don't you? Nice job with this.

Ruth

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

2 posted 2000-02-11 05:34 PM

Danny, this poem just works. It reads like a soft, slow song. Verrry nice.

Claire

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

3 posted 2000-02-11 06:02 PM

Danny, your poem is just lovely...I've just recently went through the same thing...but my problem was the same as yours...don't keep remembering ONLY the good times...remember the bad as well- then it's a little easier to understand why things didn't work...although it doesn't stop the pain...(sending you a hug to help you through!)

Hang in there m'friend...you obviously deserve better!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2000-02-11 06:42 PM

nice words of this poem,I like it very work.Keep it up.

just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

5 posted 2000-02-11 10:55 PM

I LIKE THIS POEM

IM KINDA GOING THROUGH THE SAME THING RIGHT NOW. I THINK WHERE YOU SAID "THOUGHT OF HAPPINESS WE KNEW" MAYBE THOUGHTS OF HJAPPINESS WE ONCE KNEW ???? I DUNNO THATS JUST WHAT I THINK BUT ANY HOW ITS A GREAT POEM. I HOPE YOU GET THROUGH THIS I KNOW ITS HARD.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2000-02-11 11:03 PM

Danny-
This is really sentimental.
I very much like the way you
laid it out.
Hugs to you, my friend.
Love ~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2000-02-12 12:49 PM

Danny - this is a nice piece - your words flow freely and easily - I hope you get to smile again soon .........Roniece.......

Shelley
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 263
Ohio, USA

8 posted 2000-02-12 01:02 AM

Danny,
Very nice. Would like to know the story behind this one. It's so sad, but I'm sure it had a happy ending.

Shell

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