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Valentine's Poem (Yuh...)

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wayoutwalt
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It is Valentine's Day my dear
Should I write you a ballad here
I would reveal my love this way
And for once not forget this day
It's deserving of chaplain's voice
Florists and card shops will rejoice

I loved you yesterday darling
I do love you as much today
But the sweet possibilities
Of tomorrow and forever on
Are what lovers live for
Until life is gone

So this day must forever last
It delves into the future and the past




[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-14-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 02-11-2000 04:41 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

You can hot glue that one down
wouldn't change a single word
excellent writing

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2 posted 02-11-2000 05:13 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

I'm with Rex, Walt...this is sweet and sincere...wonderful poem!

Claire
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3 posted 02-11-2000 05:20 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Right On Walt.
I`ve been trying to come up with some kinda Valentine poem but my brain wont work.
Good Job  

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
devina
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4 posted 02-11-2000 06:05 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

You should show your romantic side more often...it suits you well!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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5 posted 02-11-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

I strongly agree Walt, I even buy the glue. Such piece perhaps looks good in Stone
Ever tried carving Walt.
Well done. Like it

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Nan
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6 posted 02-12-2000 01:50 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Walt - I hope you don't waste this great Valentine poem on poor bedraggled Bob, there....

- Good stuff, my friend
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7 posted 02-12-2000 02:13 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Walt-
I LOVE IT !
What tender sentiment.

'But the sweet possibilities
Of tomorrow and forever on
Are what lovers live for'

Lovely.
~*Marge*~


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8 posted 02-13-2000 12:24 PM       View Profile for Buffpimp   Email Buffpimp   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Buffpimp

VERY GOOD POEM!!!!  There is nothing bad that i can say is about this poem.  This poem is exactly how i feel about someone in this life time of mine.  Well good luck
wayoutwalt
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9 posted 02-13-2000 11:41 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

im so sweet yuh
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This is precious, Walt!  

Denise
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Walt, walt, walt! There ya go writing a tender piece! hehe Good job! Sweet? Ya think? Me too!

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And the other will save your soul.
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12 posted 02-14-2000 01:07 AM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Call me crazy, but I thought this was rather humorous as well as touching.  Well done Walt.

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Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

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A great poem. Well done.
wayoutwalt
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14 posted 02-14-2000 07:39 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

o yuh i just let my wife read it and yuh yuh yuh ka-ching money in the bank it worked well hehehehe o im so sweet yuh...
MissNTrope
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15 posted 02-14-2000 06:41 PM       View Profile for MissNTrope   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for MissNTrope

Hey, www... hehe.. that's you, www...

I like this - timeless love, indeed..
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