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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
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New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-02-11 04:07 PM


Love, like a light in your eyes
A look that shines within
And a feeling I cannot describe
Only that you are everything
I never thought of real happiness
Until this happiness I am in

Hope, to have a heart such as yours
Once an impossible thing
Now I know what I am born for
And with this ring,
A promise that real love
Makes love a possible thing

Trust, you put your trust in me
I will never let you go
This you feel because you see
My eyes can’t help but show
You, the one I love always,
My love you will always know


© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12
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Honea Path, SC USA
1 posted 2000-02-11 04:18 PM


So soft and loving.
Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2000-02-11 05:03 PM


JML ... these are beautiful thoughts
worthy of Wedding Vows

Rex}<{{{{o>


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!


PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
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New Orleans, LA
3 posted 2000-02-11 05:12 PM


THANKS!
Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
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4 posted 2000-02-11 05:27 PM


Oh this is grand and expressive sentiment ~

"Love, like a light in your eyes
A look that shines within"

....just beautiful.

Claire



PoeticKnight
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5 posted 2000-02-11 05:50 PM


Coming from you, that is high praise, Claire.
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