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Rex Allen McCoy
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D'e  J`a  Vu



Again  the  ancient  door  creaks  and  groans
pushing  back  dust
barely  settled  from  time  immortal
~
Through  swirling  fog
a  distant  light  explodes  with  deafening
twisting  truths
~
The  ground  shatters  beneath  my  feet
as  i  hover  helplessly  above  a  boiling
hideous  vortex
~
The  voice  of  truth  explodes  from  above
each  shockwave  progressively  weights
me  down
~
I  lift  my  legs  to  avoid  the  searing  pain
as  nauseously  blistered  hands  take  hold ...
~
and  my  scream  is  but  a  gurgle
~
Unconsiousness  welcome  but  never  met
the  screaming  pain  still  rising  yet
each  fibre  ripped  apart  to  molecular  particle
~
Riding  the  vortex  of  purification ...
~
Separating  sins  from  soul ...
~
Then  finally ...
~
Spit  out  the  tail
only  to  be  caught  by  the  uterine  web
With  the  voice  of  truth  still  taunting

" better  luck  this  time "
~~~




 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!

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devina
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1 posted 02-11-2000 03:26 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I love the eerie scene that you've created with this one...quite a bit to think about!

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Michael
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2 posted 02-11-2000 03:32 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

O.K., I've read this threee times and it just keeps getting better.  I love your imagery and alusion.  A definate two thumbs up from me.

Michael
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3 posted 02-11-2000 03:36 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

This certainly invokes some food for thought!! Very well written and haunting in its delivery.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


Tara Simms
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4 posted 02-11-2000 04:21 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Wow!  If this is indicative of your talent, I need to read a lot more of your poetry.  Great job!
Rex Allen McCoy
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5 posted 02-11-2000 06:36 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Thanks everyone ... your kind thoughts are very well received ... I seldom write this
style of poetry becuse there seems to be a larger call for laughter
But since there are people here that like this type ... I'll see about giving more

Rex}<{{{{o>


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!

Rex Allen McCoy
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Almost seems as though no one is reading lately
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 02-12-2000 10:41 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Rex-
You KNOW I like this !
I very much like it.
What images you've set upon the page.
Did I mention
I LIKE IT ?
~*Marge*~


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Rex Allen McCoy
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Thanks Marge ... I don't always try to make people laugh ...

Rex}<{{{{o>


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!

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9 posted 02-12-2000 08:27 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

ooooh...Rex Allen, Rex Allen, how you have surprised me!   This is SO ME!  I love the imagery, I love the feel of it.  I'm printing this one, if you don't mind.  It felt like a present to me!

You are SO good!  more of this, please...
Rex Allen McCoy
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Be careful printing serenity ... the vortex could pull all the ink from your printer

Rex


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!

lucky
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11 posted 02-13-2000 05:54 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Hay T-Rex,
I'm not really quite sure on the SP but I guess that it will do, something they call poetic license I have but sometimes just to guess. But I like it, you have underlining emotions I feel that you'll in future project. Should I say I like it. Roll on my friend, Roll on I'll be reading to the end.
Munda
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12 posted 02-13-2000 06:18 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Rex, I enjoyed this greatly. Hope you'll still share your laughter with us too, as I enjoy that even more.  
Rex Allen McCoy
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13 posted 02-14-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

thanks lucky and munda ... I guess I'm not feeling too happy these days
I may not be writing much any more ...
perhaps it's time to hang up my pen and go back to gaming on battlenet

Rex
 
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