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just_another_fe
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0 posted 2000-02-11 03:21 PM


I CAN'T THINK OF ANYTHING TO WRITE BUT I FEEL LIKE WRITING SOMETHING SO IM JUST GONNA SAY SOME JIBBERISH. LOL BARE WITH ME PLEASE  

I WANT TO WRITE
BUT I FEEL I HAVE NOTHING TO SAY.
I WOULD WRITE ABOUT STUFF
LIKE THE GAMES THAT PEOPLE PLAY.
I COULD WRITE ABOUT
THE MAN THAT I LOVE
OR ABOUT THE GOD THATS ABOVE.
I COULD WRITE ABOUT
THE PAIN I FEEL
OR ABOUT HOW I WISH FRIENDS WERE REAL.
I COULD WRITE ABOUT
THE TEARS I SHED
OR WHY I ALONE AT NIGHT IN BED.
THESE ARE THE THOUGHTS I HAVE IN MY HEAD
BUT I DON'T KNOW HOW THESE THOUGHTS SHOULD BE SAID.

© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
Wizzard
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1 posted 2000-02-11 03:24 PM


"BUT I DON'T KNOW HOW THESE THOUGHTS SHOULD BE SAID."

I think you did a great job for one that has nothing to say


 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.

PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
2 posted 2000-02-11 03:33 PM


It seems you spoke volumes. Very good reading for nothing to write about.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



Michael
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3 posted 2000-02-11 03:40 PM


These thoughts can be said many ways,
They're simple truths, they're rainy days.
They're grief in knowing you're alone,
They're sins for which all must attone.
They're feelings left upon the shelf.
They're fear of knowing one's own self.
And though I can't tell you how to start,
It might be good to just open your heart.


Michael



[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 02-12-2000).]

Rex Allen McCoy
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4 posted 2000-02-11 04:09 PM


I wrote a poem about nothing ... heh there's nothing wrong with nothing when there's nothing else, nothing else will do like nothing else can

Rex}<{{{{o>


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!


just_another_fe
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5 posted 2000-02-11 04:23 PM


*GIGGLES* YOU GUYZ ARE THE BEST LOL THANX ALOT WIZ AND WC.

MICHEAL: THANX FOR THE HELP   I LIKED THAT LIL POEM ABOUT WHAT THEY ARE  

REX:  UM....LOL LET ME READ THAT AGAIN. LOL THANX. I THINK I'LL TRY WRITING ONE ABOUT "NOTHING"

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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6 posted 2000-02-11 04:53 PM


it's fun to write with nothin in yur head. I do it all the time! (rim-shot)
just_another_fe
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7 posted 2000-02-12 03:06 PM


wayout: its fun??? lol for me its hard. i start then a get a couple lines n start over....over n over n over again.
RobertB
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Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
8 posted 2000-02-12 07:10 PM


you said plenty....you feel lots.....you think it all. Poetry.


Robert

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