Heaven or Hell ? - The choices we all must make .

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angelswing
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

0 posted 2000-02-11 11:39 AM

Heaven or Hell ?

My eyes are blind,
my mind is numb,
my soul is down and blue,
there's nouthing left for me to do,
I feel so confused .
My heart is split between two worlds ,
torn straight down through the mid,
the cherubs stopped there holy song,
and flew away and hid .
The mist has come,
in clouds above,
the blanket covers me,
the truth is gone,
this can't be love,
that's come to set me free .
Angels guard the silent route,
upto the glowing gate,
I can't let temptation,
hamper me,
or I'll never reach my fate .
But what is this,
I have a doubt,
growing in my head,
don't make me chose,
which road to take,
or I'll never get it said .

Written by Tom Baker

Miss Abagail Mannering
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since 1999-09-01

Posts 136
byron, il

1 posted 2000-02-11 12:15 PM

This is a good poem..i can DEFINATELY relate to it!

Wizzard
Member

since 2000-02-09

Posts 209

2 posted 2000-02-11 12:23 PM

So many path`s we must chose from as we go thru life.
It would be a perfect world if we all knew in advance which path to take.
Nice job Angelswing

I hope you chose the one that is best for you.

Today is the first day of the rest of my life.

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

3 posted 2000-03-15 10:15 AM

Thanks to both of you, I think that we all have to make a lot of choises, I have decided that from now on I am just going to follow the road and let it take me where ever it leads, I will probably delete this poem soon because I have it posted up twice by accident ! Sorry . Hope that any choises that you both have to make in the near future go the write way for you .
Tom .

With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

mete out
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 270
england

4 posted 2000-03-15 10:44 AM

***Tom,
To paraphrase "The Crucible",
whatever choice you make, know that a good man has made it.
Love Lou xx

I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

Enola
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since 2000-02-11

Posts 138
England

5 posted 2000-03-15 12:03 PM

Nicely done my friend, I must say I agree with the comment made by mete out.

The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

6 posted 2000-03-16 01:02 AM

Wow this reminds me of a poem I wrote years ago.
Hard things to think about really - good poem!

'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

7 posted 2000-03-16 01:13 AM

as for me, I chose the road less traveled by and that made all the difference.....

You are in good company, Tom. Great work.

INclan

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

8 posted 2000-04-14 04:12 AM

Thanks yet again every body, your kind words lift my spirits while I sit here thinking about friends and people I care about .

With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

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