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Heaven or Hell ? - The choices we all must make .

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angelswing
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0 posted 02-11-2000 11:39 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for angelswing

Heaven or Hell ?

My eyes are blind,
my mind is numb,
my soul is down and blue,
there's nouthing left for me to do,
I feel so confused .
My heart is split between two worlds ,
torn straight down through the mid,
the cherubs stopped there holy song,
and flew away and hid .
The mist has come,
in clouds above,
the blanket covers me,
the truth is gone,
this can't be love,
that's come to set me free .
Angels guard the silent route,
upto the glowing gate,
I can't let temptation,
hamper me,
or I'll never reach my fate .
But what is this,
I have a doubt,
growing in my head,
don't make me chose,
which road to take,
or I'll never get it said .
        
                                Written by Tom Baker
© Copyright 2000 angelswing - All Rights Reserved
Miss Abagail Mannering
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1 posted 02-11-2000 12:15 PM       View Profile for Miss Abagail Mannering   Email Miss Abagail Mannering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss Abagail Mannering

This is a good poem..i can DEFINATELY relate to it!
Wizzard
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2 posted 02-11-2000 12:23 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

So many path`s we must chose from as we go thru life.
It would be a perfect world if we all knew in advance which path to take.
Nice job Angelswing
I hope you chose the one that is best for you.

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
angelswing
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3 posted 03-15-2000 10:15 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Thanks to both of you, I think that we all have to make a lot of choises, I have decided that from now on I am just going to follow the road and let it take me where ever it leads, I will probably delete this poem soon because I have it posted up twice by accident ! Sorry . Hope that any choises that you both have to make in the near future go the write way for you .
Tom .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
mete out
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4 posted 03-15-2000 10:44 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Tom,
To paraphrase "The Crucible",
whatever choice you make, know that a good man has made it.
Love Lou  xx


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.
Enola
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5 posted 03-15-2000 12:03 PM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

Nicely done my friend, I must say I agree with the comment made by mete out.

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
Severn
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6 posted 03-16-2000 01:02 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wow this reminds me of a poem I wrote years ago.
Hard things to think about really - good poem!



 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
INclan
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7 posted 03-16-2000 01:13 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

as for me, I chose the road less traveled by and that made all the difference.....

You are in good company, Tom.  Great work.

INclan
angelswing
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8 posted 04-14-2000 04:12 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Thanks yet again every body, your kind words lift my spirits while I sit here thinking about friends and people I care about .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
 
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