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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Mirrored Hearts ~Marge Tindal~ I swear ~ I loved you only once but it lasted all my life I find myself wondering why ~ you remain in my heart love your smiling face etched in the memory time has ~ passed ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've expressed true love Marge...sigh...lovely sentiments!! Very much enjoyed m'dear!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
the artist knows the rose of prose  both verbally and visually pleasing  Rex}<{{{{o> I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina- Yeah, I think so too. This heart has known love in great abundance. Rex- How sweet you are. I'm soooooooo glad someone enjoys the effort as much as I enjoy doing it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
For some, to love once is to love forever, lest it was never really love to begin with. Maybe your answer lies in that statement somewhere. If it was love, no matter what pain has been given, there is always joy in looking back. Good poem, Marge. michael |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge, your visual poetry is so nice! I particularly like the simplicity and sentiment of this one. Claire |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
All of us desire to have beautiful memories as you have. James |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I always knew that you have a lot of Love But I didn't know how artistic you can present it. Just the idea of a mirrored image Requires single applaus Well done, and with such love Marge But who am I telling here Love The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge as usual,you put a smile on my face and a warmth in my heart! I see your name and HAVE to read!! This is wonderful! -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael- Thanks, sweetie, for your thoughts. Claire- Thank you for liking it. I get sooooo much pleasure out of creating it. James, my James- The memories are within each of us. Love, no matter how or when it touched us .. is worthy of the remembrance. Helmut- Me ... you're telling me ... and I sure appreciate your appraisal of my work. I see your beautiful art on your home page and my heart melts. You are special. SEA- I'm glad for the smile and your enthusiasm is contagious ! What a doll you are. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, any man would have to have a smiling face if he had known love like yours.  [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 02-11-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge loving words expressed so divinely, nice one Tracie |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Once loved, always remembered--beautiful Marge! |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Marge- Superb talent you have much weaving poems of lost love Looks good enough to touch And shaped sweet as a dove I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Wow, "mentor", this was really amazing. I loved it. You did an awesome job.  ~Susie~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer- Thanks, hon. Keep smiling ! Tracie- I'm really glad that you liked it. Martie- Now, you got that right for sure! Mistikman- Thank you for those lovely thoughts. ~*Angel*~ For you, little Mentee, a special thanks ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tasi Junior Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 38Canada |
Put a smile on my face and gives me faith. Thankyou Marge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tasi- Smiles are good. Faith even better. I'm glad you found both in this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
It's always a pleasure to read your creative works of art! This is just lovely, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IT'S DENISE ! Welcome back ! Whew ! Thought we were gonna have to come get you ! Great big smiles to you. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely done and nice presentation |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I liked it!!!!!!! |
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Chris Goodman Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 92Issaquah, Washington usa |
Thanks for sharing your poetry. Sometimes it only takes a few words. Blue Moon |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Perfect simplicity! Brilliant! You are truly an artist. Not the one "formerly known as", but the one presently known as *Marge* Your writings are truly inspiring. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot- Thank you, lady. VanDana- I'm glad. Chris G.- I'm pleased that you enjoy it. January Flowers- I write for sheer delight. If I 'inspire', it gives me double-delight. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Marge, just had to tell you that I love the idea of time and too how the poem looks like an old hourglass. very nice. |
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