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Mirrored Hearts

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Marge Tindal
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Mirrored Hearts
~Marge Tindal~


I swear ~ I loved
you only once but it
lasted all my life
I find myself
wondering
why
~
you
remain in
my heart love
your smiling face
etched in the memory
time has ~ passed







 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
devina
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You've expressed true love Marge...sigh...lovely sentiments!!

Very much enjoyed m'dear!!!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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the
artist
knows the
rose of
prose


both verbally and visually pleasing

Rex}<{{{{o>


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!

Marge Tindal
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Devina-
Yeah, I think so too.  
This heart has known love
in great abundance.

Rex-
How sweet you are.
I'm soooooooo glad someone enjoys
the effort as much as I enjoy doing it.

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Michael
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4 posted 02-11-2000 03:04 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

For some, to love once is to love forever, lest it was never really love to begin with.  Maybe your answer lies in that statement somewhere.  If it was love, no matter what pain has been given, there is always joy in looking back.  Good poem, Marge.


michael
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Marge, your visual poetry is so nice! I particularly like the simplicity and sentiment of this one.

Claire
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All of us desire to have beautiful memories as you have.   James
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I always knew that you have a lot of Love
But I didn't know how artistic you can present it.
Just the idea of a mirrored image
Requires single applaus
Well done, and with such love Marge
But who am I telling here
Love



 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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Marge as usual,you put a smile on my face and a warmth in my heart! I see your name and HAVE to read!! This is wonderful!   -SEA
Marge Tindal
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Michael-
Thanks, sweetie, for your thoughts.

Claire-
Thank you for liking it.  I get sooooo much pleasure out of creating it.

James, my James-
The memories are within each of us.
Love, no matter how or when it touched us ..
is worthy of the remembrance.

Helmut-
Me ... you're telling me ... and I sure
appreciate your appraisal of my work.
I see your beautiful art on your home page
and my heart melts.
You are special.

SEA-
I'm glad for the smile and your enthusiasm is contagious !  
What a doll you are.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 02-11-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Marge, any man would have to have a smiling face if he had known love like yours.

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 02-11-2000).]
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Marge loving words expressed so divinely, nice one   Tracie
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Once loved, always remembered--beautiful Marge!
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Marge-

Superb talent you have much
weaving poems of lost love
Looks good enough to touch
And shaped sweet as a dove

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

Angel
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Wow, "mentor", this was really amazing. I loved it. You did an awesome job.  

 ~Susie~

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Balladeer-
Thanks, hon.  Keep smiling !

Tracie-
I'm really glad that you liked it.

Martie-
Now, you got that right for sure!

Mistikman-
Thank you for those lovely thoughts.

~*Angel*~
For you, little Mentee,
a special thanks !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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Put a smile on my face and gives me faith. Thankyou Marge  
Marge Tindal
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Tasi-
Smiles are good.
Faith even better.
I'm glad you found both in this.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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It's always a pleasure to read your creative works of art! This is just lovely, Marge!  

Denise
Marge Tindal
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IT'S DENISE !
Welcome back !
Whew !  Thought we were gonna
have to come get you !
Great big smiles to you.
Love ~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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Nicely done and nice presentation  
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I liked it!!!!!!!
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Thanks for sharing your poetry.  Sometimes it only takes a few words.


 Blue Moon
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Perfect simplicity!
Brilliant!
You are truly an artist.
Not the one "formerly known as",
but the one presently known as
*Marge*
Your writings are truly inspiring.
Marge Tindal
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Hoot-
Thank you, lady.

VanDana-
I'm glad.

Chris G.-
I'm pleased that you enjoy it.

January Flowers-
I write for sheer delight.
If I 'inspire', it gives me double-delight.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


 
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