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lucky
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0 posted 02-11-2000 12:48 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lucky

Home

Is the best Well come as I was
in courage by a fiend to be gone this
journey never linking for a weak or so that it cold
get used this way it did too I’m so glad butt sad you there
yet your presents brings such relief to this aura vaginal draft
and purr puss of mist little chapter which was to leaf you
into a piece full come for table ground but if you no
thing like me you be tried of the same mold
contempt or airy voids that sneaks to
glory fly woke gather then tall
ants which draft tick
ally skewers art and graces
such in dived level souls with the
drudge airy of woke..! I can soy tan any
be leaf which is the truth of this fawn ally if own
lye manna festered threw a single palm or many foams
thy music your peach the very mass sagé of finessé
in appear ants and at tit lewd shod be in tart
con trash to ease kind of odor ease
very same will not rest pond
to a poets rule of dumb
which pears to be just act
ally what they lethal ridge ally
cordon wit newt protest or sin sure
as a mark of ally ants in this fare fate of
finessé... so if I woke at it yon enough
will fat make it add mire able odor
I weight for the voids to rule
ball looming nocturne
ally true in neat..?


 



[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 03-02-2000).]
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John Yaws
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1 posted 02-11-2000 01:04 AM       View Profile for John Yaws   Email John Yaws   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit John Yaws's Home Page   View IP for John Yaws

While I am not certain that the form is considered poetry, I very much like the insight and the content. Welcome aboard.
lucky
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2 posted 02-11-2000 03:58 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Thanks Gun,

It took me a long time to see poetray in the beginning but I'm sure you'll get there. Thanks just the same.
angelswing
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3 posted 02-11-2000 05:18 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

I don't think that Gunslinger is being very fair, I think that poetry is defined as just the expression of a feeling to make it's beauty clear, there for this must be some form of poetry or anougher, any way it's a nice thought, keep them coming .
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4 posted 02-11-2000 05:19 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lucky ...
and man oh man are you just exactly that ...
L U C K Y !  What a BEAUTIFUL POEM and the
format is as esthetically pleasing as the thoughts you've penned.

Such talent !  I admire greatly.
~*Marge*~





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5 posted 02-11-2000 10:51 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

These words spoken from the heart are beautiful poetry!
 
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