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Stories Untold

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Eloise
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since 11-27-1999
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0 posted 02-11-2000 12:12 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Eloise

Age has stolen all of your grace
And left you with wrinkles on your face.
But your heart remains bigger than ever before.
And each day that passes I love you more.

Time is passing, you're becoming old.
With so many stories still untold.
Your dreams of youth are scattered in the wind.
Tell me more tales, enchant me once again.

Scatter the stones of yesterdays past.
Make the visions come alive, that's all I ask.
I want to laugh and cry with you.
And share your feelings so genuine and true.

© Copyright 2000 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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1 posted 02-11-2000 12:21 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Love that endures time is the most beautiful love that exists  
Wizzard
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since 02-09-2000
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2 posted 02-11-2000 12:31 AM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Eloise,
this has really touched my heart.
It has brought back so many memories from the day`s that my grandparents were here.
I wish all couples had the strength and love to make that life long commitment last their whole lives like so many before this generation have.

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.


[This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-11-2000).]
Mike
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3 posted 02-11-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nicely done.  I enjoyed this wonderful poem.
 
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