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Wizzard
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0 posted 2000-02-10 11:03 PM


Once again I say goodbye
to you who means so much,
Knowing that I`ll never again
feel the tenderness of your touch,
Im not hurt,bummed or mad
Im thankful that we had met,
Even after all that`s happened
I have not a single regret,
I`ll always treasure
the many footprints,
That are deep
inside my heart,
The feelings I have for you
My freind,
Are one`s that`ll never part,
Understand that Im not sad
Because i didn`t find a wife,
You`ve made me a very happy man
because with you
I Found A Friend For Life.

This is how you make me feel.


< !signature-->

 Today is the first day of the rest of your life.



[This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-16-2000).]

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Breathe~
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1 posted 2000-02-10 11:21 PM


Very touching...and your positive outlook on life is very refreshing...

Nice writes... )


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2000-02-11 12:07 PM


Wizzard, this is so nice! It's refreshing for me to hear this from a guy.  -SEA
Eloise
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3 posted 2000-02-11 12:20 PM


Wizzard, I loved the flow and the content of this poem.  And remember, a friend will always be there.
Wizzard
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4 posted 2000-02-11 04:27 AM


Breathe,Sea and Eloise,
Thank you for your replies.
I have seen a few friendships from online that have went from good to bad after meeting.Im glad that her and I had the chance to meet and Im even happier that her and I are still very good friends.

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.

angelswing
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5 posted 2000-02-11 04:55 AM


This truly is Wizzard, a great poem, some friends can be for life and others just fade with time, the ones that fade away arn't worth the bother, find the people who love and care and that are true to there hearts and honest as the day is long . That gives me an idea, inspirational .
Thanks .

Wizzard
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6 posted 2000-02-11 10:43 AM


Angel:
Thank you for your reply.
I look forward to seeing what your idea is,that is if it was an idea for a writing?

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.

BSC
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7 posted 2000-02-11 10:57 AM


Wizzard - You're right, the important thing is to have no regret....A beautiful, inspiring poem that surely touched my heart.
silvershaddow
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8 posted 2000-02-11 11:45 AM


After the initial devastation of spitting up with my first love, I can now relate to these words, which have given me inspiration to keep going.
Wizzard
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9 posted 2000-02-11 03:18 PM


BSC,Im glad that you liked this one and thank you for the kind reply

Silver,I hope that the two of you are still able to remain friends?
Good luck to both of you

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.

Michael
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10 posted 2000-02-11 03:22 PM


Beautiful and very wize words, Wizzard.  They hit home kind of hard with me for some reason.  Much truth gleaned from this poem might be readily applied in my life.  Thank you.


Michael

just_another_fe
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11 posted 2000-02-11 03:28 PM


LOVE THE POEM WIZ. IT HITS HOME. I HAVE HAD A LOT OF FRIENDS THAT I THOUGHT WERE "GREAT" AND TO MY SUPRISE THEY ENDED. I LIKE THE END   SUCH A POSITIVE OUTLOOK. HEHEHE I LIKE THAT LIL GUY YOU PUT AT THE END  
Wizzard
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12 posted 2000-02-11 09:22 PM


Michael,
Im glad you enjoyed this one.
Keep your head up and things will all work out for ya  


Just,
I beleive in that lil saying "Make new friends and keep the old,one is silver and the other`s gold".
There`s nothing better than a true friend and nothing worse than one who pretends.
Thank you for reading.  < !signature-->

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.


[This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-12-2000).]

Nan
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13 posted 2000-02-12 01:53 PM


Oftentimes a lifetime friend is infinitely more precious - nice poem, Wizzard..
Wizzard
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14 posted 2000-02-12 05:39 PM


Thank You Nan.
Your reply as well as the other`s in passion, really means alot to me

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.

Chris Goodman
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since 2000-01-28
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15 posted 2000-02-12 06:31 PM


This is refreshing.
I really enjoyed this.

Chris

 Blue Moon


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cK Navarro
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Helsinki Finland
16 posted 2000-02-12 09:29 PM


we´re all looking for anything that´s true, which is so very hard to find. You are a lucky one, for you´ve found one! Keep a grip of it!!!    

                        cheerio
                          -C-

Wizzard
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17 posted 2000-02-12 09:53 PM


Chris,cK,
thank you for your replies.
Ya know I have to laugh at one thing that`s very funny here at Passion..A man will post one thing for a lady and a diff. for another man.A lady will post the same either way....But when a man post something sweet for another man....As soon as he find`s out,he`ll go right back and edit that post...lmbo...ok Im guilty of this....lmbo again.

Anyway...thank`s again  < !signature-->

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.


[This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-13-2000).]

Marina
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18 posted 2000-02-12 11:15 PM


Lovers come and go and for each a life lesson to learn..but a friend, true friend stays in the heart.
devina
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19 posted 2000-02-12 11:30 PM


There's much wisdom in your words m'friend...fate intertwines itself unknowingly sometimes...but is for the best I've learned...enjoyed the poem much!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Wizzard
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20 posted 2000-02-13 01:28 AM


Marina,How true that is...thank you for reading and your reply

Devina,You are no child I can see.
Your experience in life show`s thru your type....Thank you for your reply

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.

WhtDove
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21 posted 2000-02-13 01:39 AM


This was a wonderful poem! People may come and go, but friends are forever!  

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

Wizzard
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22 posted 2000-02-13 04:12 AM


WhtDove,your kindness in your type always put`s a smile on my face.......Thank you for your reply WhtDove

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


Meadowmuse
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23 posted 2000-02-13 01:54 PM


Wizzard, you're saying a lot about your character with this poem...that you value the gift of friendship and are willing to work hard toward maintaining it. Liked the poem, like the little dancing fella too.  

Claire

Wizzard
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24 posted 2000-02-13 03:04 PM


Thank you Claire,
Good friends are hard to find.
And she`s become a very good friend that offer`s me alot of support.
Thank`s again

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
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25 posted 2000-02-13 04:38 PM


A friendship like you decribe
I surely hard to find
But be gald that you have found
What others craving for thier entire life
Well done poem, so wise I see
Can only Wizzards be.< !signature-->

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.  



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Wizzard
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26 posted 2000-02-13 08:34 PM


HelmutB,
Thank`s for reading and replying as well.
The replies are what make`s all here at Passion feel so much like friend`s  




< !signature-->

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.



[This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-13-2000).]

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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27 posted 2000-02-14 05:14 AM


Wizzard - once again you have me captured with your beautiful words        

Keep smiling and Happy Valentine's Day!!
Roniece xx

Wizzard
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28 posted 2000-02-14 07:17 PM


Roniece,aaawwww shucks    
Dar ya go with dem xx`s again.
Thank you for your kind reply.
Why can`t I find any of your writing`s here in #6 ????I`ll be looking for`em.
Oh and
XXX
back at ya with a Great Big
Happy Valentine`s Day
To You and Your`s
< !signature-->

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.





[This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-15-2000).]

freckles
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29 posted 2000-02-14 08:04 PM


Wizzard...........beautiful.........words to which I can relate.
Wizzard
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30 posted 2000-02-14 11:23 PM


Thank you for reading and replying Freckles.
And Happy Valentine`s Day to You and Your`s

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


Wizzard
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31 posted 2000-02-14 11:23 PM


Thank you for reading and replying Freckles.
And Happy Valentine`s Day to You and Your`s


 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


tracie66
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32 posted 2000-02-15 03:19 AM


Wiz she must have meant alot to you and been a very special person for you to have such meanigful words for her. I hope you remain good friends (Mommy)  
christies heart
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33 posted 2000-02-15 04:33 AM


Such a great statement this makes. Sometimes what we find in a "just a friend" is so much better than what we find when we search for more.  
Wizzard
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34 posted 2000-02-15 11:17 AM


Tracie,Christies,
She is, a very special friend.Although we`re not as close as we once were.
She`ll always have a place in my heart and I`ll always have the memories to hold onto as well.
Thank`s (mommy)..lol.. and Christies for reading  < !signature-->

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.



[This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-15-2000).]

hoot_owl_rn
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35 posted 2000-02-15 11:25 AM


This is a wonderful verse...would that everyone could be so lucky  
Corazon
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36 posted 2000-02-15 01:05 PM


yep, agree with hoot, and I count myself lucky, I could have written these same feelings...a friend for life is a precious thing    great poem
Wizzard
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37 posted 2000-02-15 02:37 PM


Hoot,
Thank you again for your kind reply.
Im glad that you like`d this one


Corozan,
How true that is.
Thank you for reading and your kind reply.

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


Martie
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38 posted 2000-02-15 05:35 PM


A friend for life is a joy forever.  What a great poem!
Rosalind Palafox
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39 posted 2000-02-15 05:58 PM


Beautiful poem!

 "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb

Wizzard
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40 posted 2000-02-16 05:28 PM


Martie,Rosalind,
Thank you for reading and responding with your kind replies

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


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