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Short Thoughts on Yes

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Martie
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              Short Thoughts on Yes

It was dark when stars
were sprinkled
on my forehead,
yet, through the
blue and green day
I feel somewhere growing
beautiful shine
because of you.
***

A red rose,
dew curling around
its velvet fingers
is envious of me,
passion flowers around
my hot-house heart.

***
Soft as the skies
when white covers the sun
and when the earth
is damp with rain,
that soft are your eyes
when your heart is full
of yes.
***

I saw the moon tonight
through a piece of tinsel,
can you bring it closer
so I can touch it
just to see if it rings.


***


There is a boy-girl
where Iím the girl
and loves the dash
that makes them one

***



 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
© Copyright 2000 Martie Odell-Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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Martie, your hothouse heart is in full bloom. Beautiful, as always.
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Yes is such a wonderful word isn't it???

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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Martie-
GIRL YOU ARE SOMETHING ELSE .. YES !  YOU ARE !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Hey...how come I can't come up with any of these short thoughts  
Mike
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Such a splendid talent to express yourself.
Truly enjoyed.
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Martie-
   Just playin' in the archives tonight,
   and came across this treasure.
   I LOVE IT!
   Wonderful thoughts you've penned, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


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