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Open Poetry #6

Short Thoughts on Yes

Martie

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California

0 posted 2000-02-10 09:29 PM

Short Thoughts on Yes

It was dark when stars
were sprinkled
on my forehead,
yet, through the
blue and green day
I feel somewhere growing
beautiful shine
because of you.
***

A red rose,
dew curling around
its velvet fingers
is envious of me,
passion flowers around
my hot-house heart.

***
Soft as the skies
when white covers the sun
and when the earth
is damp with rain,
that soft are your eyes
when your heart is full
of yes.
***

I saw the moon tonight
through a piece of tinsel,
can you bring it closer
so I can touch it
just to see if it rings.

***

There is a boy-girl
where I’m the girl
and loves the dash
that makes them one

***

In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2000-02-10 09:35 PM

Martie, your hothouse heart is in full bloom. Beautiful, as always.

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2000-02-10 09:53 PM

Yes is such a wonderful word isn't it???

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-02-10 10:22 PM

Martie-
GIRL YOU ARE SOMETHING ELSE .. YES ! YOU ARE !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2000-02-11 12:28 PM

Hey...how come I can't come up with any of these short thoughts

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

5 posted 2000-02-11 12:34 PM

Such a splendid talent to express yourself.
Truly enjoyed.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2001-08-15 02:39 AM

Martie-
   Just playin' in the archives tonight,
   and came across this treasure.
   I LOVE IT!
   Wonderful thoughts you've penned, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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