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As Long As There Is Love

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 02-10-2000 05:46 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

I know there are times
When the weight of responsibility
Drags you down sometimes
And it seems like such a crime
That I want you to love me

If you needed me to carry you
To help with the burden
There’s nothing I wouldn’t do
Because I am hurting too
Whenever you are hurting

And I want you to realize
That whatever you’re thinking of
I can see it in your eyes
I don’t want affection to die
As long as there is love


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1 posted 02-10-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

This is so touching and sounds like it came directly from within your heart.

Claire
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2 posted 02-10-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

This was kind of a personal one. Thanks.
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3 posted 02-10-2000 07:24 PM       Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Rosalind Palafox

right from the heart!   ~Rosalind~

 "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with."
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4 posted 02-10-2000 07:38 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

This was wonderful JML, this is exactly how I feel about the one I love.

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

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JML~ Beautiful, always so beautiful! -SEA
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Thanks guys.....
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