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All by myself

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 02-10-2000 05:22 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

All by myself

Can I get into your eyes
and into your heart?
If you glanced at me
would feelings start?
Cause thats what
happened to me.
My eyes glanced your way.
My heart said keep looking
don't look away.
Have you cast a spell on me?
Cause now I like you.
Do you like me?
I really want to tell you
how I now feel.
How about you?
Is this for real
or only a chance.
Can you encourage me
in anyway?
I would love a sultry glance
cast my way.
Please reveal the way you feel
in some small way.
Will you stop keeping your feelings
all to yourself!!!
or is this only another opportunity
for me to fall in love
all by myself.

Jameslee@forAnnFebruary10,2000

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HelmutB
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1 posted 02-10-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Well I guess there is only one way to find out.
How about giving the poem to her on Valentines Day and see what happens.
You never know until you ask.
Your poem is so well done, very well

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Rosalind Palafox
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One always finds him/herself asking these same questions everyday of their life. Guess one will never know, until the first move is made.~rosalind~

 "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with."
fool
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3 posted 02-10-2000 07:14 PM       View Profile for fool   Email fool   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fool

I loved the last 2 lines in this,but
the whole poem really conveys
your feelings,well done.
devina
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4 posted 02-10-2000 07:23 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Don't fall by yourself hun...tis a pretty rough one!!! I agree with Helmut...give this to her...only then will you know you've done your part!!! And good luck!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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5 posted 02-10-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

James-
You are writing some goooooood poetry.
When the heart is open ... beautiful words like this come tumbling out and usually someone sees the opening and quietly
enters in.
~*Marge*~


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JamesMichael
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6 posted 02-11-2000 05:46 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Helmut and that sounds like a good idea.  I may take Ann to lunch tomorrow or if not than on Sunday soooooo I will probably give her the poem on Sunday or Monday.  I have written 5 poems for Ann and already given her three so maybe I'll give her number 4 tomorrow and "All by myself" on Sunday or Monday.
Thank you Rosalind and that is true if she is willing to spend more time with me than I will ask many of these questions.
Thank you fool for your nice comments.  I believe that is a consistant fear of mine to fall in love all by myself.
Thanks devina, yes, me and ann will probably go out to lunch tomorrow.  We went to "Scream 3" on Sunday and she loved it.
Marge it gives me happiness when you say such nice things about my writing and I also appreciate your open and soft heart.  James
 
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