I'm not sure where this stuff is coming from. Its so very much unlike me. Reading all you work has helped. With practice I hope I can write as well as you as all of you. Hopefuly I will have something else to write about one of these days...
On springs sweet scent she came My heart took control The thinking was over
Things we did wrong Things we did right Never once thinking we’re in for a fight
We tried it before We’ll try it again Never once thinking this is where we’ve once been
Tears spilled in anger Tears spilled in pain Never once thinking you may feel the same
Nights I did suffer Days I stood strong Never once thinking this pain could be wrong
Hearts can be broken Souls can be scared Now I am thinking could life be this hard
Now’s a time for healing A time to rebuild Now that I’m thinking...
[This message has been edited by WilliamHugh (edited 02-10-2000).]
this is a very good poem, and often the best when we dont know where the feelings are coming from. I have done this so many times and then looked back upon the poem and realized a lot of emotions that I never understood. Nice work.
Only after trying so hard to let go, did i realize how much i wanted to hold you forever> Amber and Ellis forever and always