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I love what you do to me

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Kyttn
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0 posted 02-10-2000 01:28 PM       View Profile for Kyttn   Email Kyttn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kyttn's Home Page   View IP for Kyttn

The breaking of dawn, as I arise
Wiping the sleep from my weary eyes
I gaze out of my window to see the sun...
Like the sun, you bring light into my life
And chase the darkest clouds away...

I step outside, into the day
A breeze blows gently through my hair...
I close my eyes and I think of you...
Like the wind, you are the breath of fresh air
That whispers softly in my ears...

As I stroll along the sunlit way
I hear birds twittering somewhere
Cheerfully, in the distance...
It reminds me of how my heart begins to flutter
When you are on my mind...

I come home at the end of the day
And hear the silence all around me..
And it makes me think
Of the peace that you bring me...
A warm, serene feeling washes through me.

I prepare for bed, and once again
Gaze out of the window
Into the stars above...
And i'm reminded of the sparkle in your eyes
That I see when you gaze upon me...

Closing my eyes, as a wave of sleep washes over me
I drift into undisturbed dreams.
And I smile to myself as a final thought passes through my mind...
It is the thought of you...
And the feeling of absolute joy and love that you bring me.

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Adriahh
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1 posted 02-10-2000 01:34 PM       View Profile for Adriahh   Email Adriahh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Adriahh

I'm not a big love poem fan.. but I really saw your words alive in my head, in animation of course  
Adria
2dalimit
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2 posted 02-10-2000 01:52 PM       View Profile for 2dalimit   Email 2dalimit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2dalimit

I enjoyed your poem. I write mostly of my wife when it is a love poem (or else). keep up the good work.
Melton
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 02-10-2000 02:06 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Kyttn,
Enjoyed the read.
Beki
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4 posted 02-10-2000 02:45 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

enjoyed walking through the day with you  
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 02-12-2000 02:44 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Great poem!

 I'm not waving, I'm drowning!
Poet deVine
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6 posted 02-12-2000 10:41 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I hope you gave this to the one you love! I'm sure it is appreciated. Nice poem!  
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7 posted 02-12-2000 10:43 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kyttn-
This had a soft flow to it.
I enjoyed the read.
~*Marge*~


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