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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 2000-02-10 10:37 AM


Sometimes when she smiles
And looks into his eyes
She whispers as she cries
That it’s been love all the while

But he can’t seem to feel
The love that used to be
Something he just can’t see
The love he used to feel

She holds his hand so sweet
And tells him it can’t be true
‘For I still love only you’
And he touches her face as sweet

He tells her not to worry so much
And that he understands frustrations
And that he knows her aggravations
Because his heart she has touched

He expresses that love is random
He says his heart always fills
Yet sometimes it kills
When she takes anger out upon him

He tries to make her understand
That he tries to be everything
That she only needs to ask anything
Then he takes her trembling hand

And she smiles again
This time with her eyes as well
Whispers softly, ‘I love you as well’
And tightly holds on to him



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1 posted 2000-02-10 12:05 PM


JML, this is lovely.-SEA
PoeticKnight
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2 posted 2000-02-10 12:28 PM


Thanks again SEA.
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3 posted 2000-02-10 12:41 PM


This is soooo sweet, glad you're so understanding!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

PoeticKnight
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4 posted 2000-02-10 12:52 PM


I don't really understand. I think I never will.
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