she flowed out of the car one smooth leg after the other with liquidity and grace her sex appeal dripped from head to toe as she poured across the concrete and at the crook of her finger men splash at her knees spewing words of undying love begging for just one drip and I look down at my jeans and comfortable shoes and suddenly I don't feel... wet enough
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This poem has a messge that says a lot about how men and women interact and explains many of the actions that come from how sex appeal is used and how men respond to it. I believe this poem should be required reading for all passion participants. Well, i'm thinking out loud and it's one man's opinion. Well written! Danny
devina, thanks, flowing is a good compliment for this one huh? lol lj, you know your compliments always mean much to me, so thank you much Adriahh, thanks breathe, I love your poems too, so this is nice to hear
I agree with you, that some of the best poems are the uninhibited ones you just kinda throw out onto paper. I really enjoyed this. Definitely one poem that I know would be even more benefited by being read out loud. Thanks for sharing.
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