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tracie66
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Mum you gave me inspiration, you gave me my wing's
I can fly to wherever I want and do almost anything

You've shown me how to be a good person and a loving mum
You helped make me who I am today and the person I've become

You taught me right from wrong and helped me along the way
You helped lift my spirits when my world sometimes seamed grey

Your a wonderful mum an absolute angel and I strive to be like you
And from your constant love and devotion my eternal wings grew

                          

© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-10-2000 06:41 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tracie-
A loving thought for your Mum.
Very sweetly done.
~*Marge*~


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Awonderful tribute for your Mum Tracie, Well Done!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Michael
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Beautiful and heartfelt.  I am envious of any who may feel this way about their "mum".


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Tracie~ How very loving! You must make your Mum's heart swell with pride!   -SEA
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Tracie: Sounds like you and your mum have a good relationship...bless...have you shown her this?  Cause if you haven't I'll bet it makes her day..

HUGS

 The grape passes through the press to yield wine.
Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom..

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Aww this is really sweet  
I hope someday my kids write me something similar!
tracie66
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Marge thanks for reading and replying     DarkAngel lovely reply thanks   Michael my mum is so wonderful and I'm very greatful to have a mum like her.   Sea thanks for reading & replying          RainbowGirl My mum has seen this I framed it & gave it to her for her birthday 2 years ago and she loved it.     Adriahh I hope to that my daughter and I have the same relationship and respect for each other as I do with my mum thanks for your reply      

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sniff yuh
tracie66
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wayoutwalt thanks for your reply...Tracie
hoot_owl_rn
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A nice tribute to probably the most powerful influence in your life. I hope you shared this with her  
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11 posted 02-11-2000 05:39 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Tracie,this one should be on a Mother`s Day card.
I hope you shared this with your mum?
Very Nice Job Tracie  

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.


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I love my mum also!!!! Aren't they all wonderful???

 "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with."
tracie66
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Ruth, I did share this with my mum and she loved it. She been a wonderful mum one I cherish dearly, Thanks for your reply.  
Dear wizzard Thankyou for your kind words I appreciate them.   Rosalind you must have a mum like mine, I think we are very lucky. I hope I am just as wonderful as a mum, you can only try.  
lucky
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I been thinking a lot about mom lately as the 29th. is her birthday so tracie I chose this one. She was so dear to me and also a music companion as she taught me to play the piano and guitar, so many wonderful times to remember. Thanks for your RE:'s

Forever Dale
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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This is an absolutely beautiful tribute to your mother!  I'm going to send it to mine, and tell her I found it here.
~ ~ ~
Dear Dale - I'm so very, very sorry your mom is gone.  She loved you so dearly and truly.  I believe you were her favorite child, if I might dare to say that.  I'm so glad we'll all be together again in Heaven.
Love, Rosemary
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Tracie66,
A touching and beautiful poem. A lovely read
tracie66
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Dear Dale
I'm touched that you chose this and I'm honoured also.
You know alot of times we tend to take our mum's for granted and don't appreciated them until they are ill or no longer here with us, I try not to do that.
You must miss your mum terribly, feel free to e-mail me if you want to talk.
Hugs....Tracie~

Rosemary~
I'm also touched by your reply and I hope your mum like's this  
Tracie~

Sy~
I'm so glad you read this and I always appreciate your comments
Tracie~


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