This poem has been removed to another forum for review as per questionable content. I would ask the author to please contact me by email if he/she wishes to discuss the reasons in particular or desires to edit the piece for reposting. I would also ask that he/she consult the forum guidelines before posting again.
[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 02-10-2000).]
I think it's mainly the first stanza that might offend...you can always hit the edit button at the top of your page and delete the bad stuff!!! Other than that I see your emotion ringing loud and clear...