San Jose, CA, USA
wayoutwalt- my, you do have a special way with the english language don't you? I thank you for the sentiment though, it is well recieved.
Christopher- Thank you. I tried really hard and made every line of this poem 6 syllables, but I think I got the stresses all messed up, because it doesnt flow like I think it should.
devina- Thank you. Well, it is hard seeing her in this situation, because I have parents that are barely strict at all. They attempted to take control of my life a few years ago and I refused to let them. It was a difficult year, but it eventually worked and I won a great deal of freedom.
Craig- Thank you. Maybe after we finish with the first poem we can start to work on this one. I really need to fix the stresses on it.
jmlee12345- I hope you are right about the situation fixing itself in time. Her grades are already suffering in school because she is not allowed to see assistance outside of school.
SEA- Thank you. Unfortunately, moving out is not an option where I live. The average cost of an apartment is about $1,400 a month. Plus, she would have other expenses she doesn't now. Sadly, an 18 year old couldn't possibly imagine moving out to anywhere but college where I live.
I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion