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bobbycat
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0 posted 02-10-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for bobbycat

You


red roses would be nice
big balloons would be kind
colorful candy is just so sweet
but what I want is hard to find

roses die a shriveling death
balloons are full of hot air
candy doesn't hide the pounds it adds
what I want is extremely rare

I know you're wondering what I'd like
I'll give you a little clue
it may be hidden; it may be rare
but it's valuable and priceless, too

this Valentine poem has found its end
I'm sticking to you like glue
because this Valentine's Day, you'll see,
that all I want is YOU.
© Copyright 2000 Christina L. Petrosky - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 02-10-2000 01:10 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

o very sweet yuh too whom it is given great rewards ensue yuh i think thats right

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-10-2000).]
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2 posted 02-10-2000 01:25 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

BobbyCat-
This is adorable.
Just the cutest valentine greeting.
Would make a great e-card !
~*Marge*~


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bobbycat
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3 posted 02-10-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Actually, I DID write it for my boyfriend a few years ago (okay, try 6--LOL) because I was too broke to get him a present!  LOL      He loved it anyway--said that no one had ever written any poetry for him...awwww!!!!  

Bobbycat =^..^=
Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 02-10-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

awwww, so sweet and a perfect V-Day gift for anyone!  No matter how long ago you wrote it, it can always be used LoL...giving mea  good idea for my Valentine LoL

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!
Breathe~
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5 posted 02-10-2000 07:00 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

*smiling~smiling*

Can I borrow this?  *hehe*

This is a lot of fun!   )


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...
bobbycat
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6 posted 02-10-2000 09:00 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Borrow away--I don't mind!!  LOL     And thanks to everyone for the nice comments--they mean so much!  

Bobbycat =^..^=
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7 posted 02-10-2000 09:27 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Bobbycat, cuteness oozes out this poem. Nothing can beat sweetness and sincerity. This is great  
 
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